Fic: What Makes the Man (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

You know what this LJ needs? A new layout. Much as I love the current one, some changes are in order around here. But first, as promised, fic. First in a series, and you can all thank our dear anonymous friend for the inspiration for this one. Part one is porny, porny, porny, as promised. Part two will be along shortly, I'm sure. As for a

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[alpdrucken]

That... that was erotic.

*whimpers*

[carolinecrane]

I aim to please.

[oh_mumble]

I *heart* the trolls.

Series?! You are going to kill me. Death through porn. My parents will be so proud.

[carolinecrane]

You know, that troll business is working out to be pretty inspirational. Who knew?

[silverwing]

Oh my good god, that was amazing. O_O Nick and Greg roleplaying together is insanely erotic, and so CUTE all at once. I love how Nick tries so much to make Greg happy, and cares so much that even when he's role playing he's reassuring and gentle and... gah that was great I can't wait to read more <3

[carolinecrane]

Aw, I'm so happy that Nick's caring side came through. I wasn't sure how well that worked. I just like picturing him standing there in that uniform like a big dork, feeling as stupid as the day is long. Because I'm mean that way.

[silverwing]

Oh, but I could see it too. >3 He's so selfconscious it's adorable. And you captured that so well!

[writingpathways]

Oh.My.God. Nick in his old uniform... it's a wonder Greg didn't faint. I might've. Whew... that was hot. You've out done yourself.

Can't wait for part 2!

[carolinecrane]

Hee. Thanks.

[carolinecrane]

Hi!

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So...does this title, like, come with a badge or something? Because I? Totally want that on a t-shirt, stat.