FIC: LACUNA (2/2)

[carolinablu85]

Title: Lacuna
Author: carolinablu85
Chapter: 2/2
Characters: Luke/Noah, Ameera, Jeremy (OC) (is he, at this point?), Dr. Cooke (OC), random appearances by others
Rating: R for language, oh shizzle
Word Count: 6,095
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Anything that’s not owned by ATWT is probably owned by Charlie Kaufman and Michel Gondry (including plot/some dialogue/any

Comments

[cindyls1969]

I know we all like to think about how fated they were to be together, but now you've written it! Perfect!

[carolinablu85]

aw, thank you Cindy! I tried my very very hardest to make that true in the story, turns out with those boys it happens no matter what! :) Thank you so so much

[jackie_oh]

I hate you so much.

I hate how beautiful this was. And how it made me cry. I fucking hate you.

[carolinablu85]

Best compliment you could ever give me. Mostly because I revel in your hate and gain strength from it. Like magic.

[wasabi_girl1]

I cried so much it's not even funny... :')

[carolinablu85]

I'm not laughing, I promise, but I am happy :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting and liking, it really truly makes me feel good about this story!

[babslovesmusic]

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

This was so awesome to read I couldn't stop for a second. Watching all the memories just fade away was heartbreaking. I felt like I was seeing the Re-watch all in one sitting. I held my breath when Noah was a young boy and Luke was hiding with him. "No one ever looks at me." OMG OMG Do you enjoy making people cry?

"The way there's this huge story, novel-length, War and Peace length, in his face that he tries not to show." This! This!

Thank you for sharing your present with us. The boys are meant to be together forever and a day.

Oh yeah, I LOVED THIS like LUKE LOVES NOAH and NOAH LOVES LUKE. :D

[carolinablu85]

I think it's so funny, because I started planning this before the rewatch started, and then they were both going on in my head at the same time! It made for both good/sad inspiration ;)

["no one ever looks at me" was stolen from the movie! but it was a different mood/context in that, and it was so perfect for Noah and how he must have grown up, so I lovingly stole. hee]

Thank you thank you for such sweet words! I always, no matter what, get nervous posting stories. And comments like these always make me feel better :)

[kelly_ken]

Holy shit. This is perfection. OMG, so beautifully written and their love! and yay for a happy ending.

Thanks for sharing this!

[carolinablu85]

wow, WOW thank you! Glad you liked!