Comments | carminablue: I love me some prompts!

carminablue

I love me some prompts!

Oct 08, 2007 19:17

Title: The Autumn Years
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slash, barefootboys, remus/sirius, hp fics

Comments 6

handjobs4free October 9 2007, 03:05:25 UTC

Oh, ouch. Just brilliant. I love the first bit most of all, and I especially like this line- "His arms raised, he was nature’s last hope.."

Augh. Fantastic!

carminablue October 9 2007, 03:13:52 UTC

Aww. You're so nice! Thanks for the stellar review.

dearhenrietta October 9 2007, 10:33:02 UTC

That was simply glorious. It actually sucked me in. I love the metaphor of autumn and how you applied it throughout. Simply brilliant.

Bravo.

carminablue October 9 2007, 19:18:59 UTC

*blushes*

Thanks so much! I was a bit afraid that the metaphor would be lost or would seem too redundant, but I'm glad you thought it worked.

interrobanging October 9 2007, 15:12:22 UTC

*wibble*

I love love love the image of Sirius spinning in the falling leaves. Can totally see it in my mind. Well done!

carminablue October 9 2007, 19:22:24 UTC

Thanks! Your wibble is greatly appreciated. That bit was my favorite part to write, since it was so youthful and happy that it made me want to skip around my house for bit. I'm glad you liked it too!