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Hit the Ground Upright 6

Feb 16, 2011 20:06

Title: Hit the Ground Upright 6/6
Author: carmexgirl
Pairing: Dean/Castiel, Castiel/OMC
Rating: NC-17 overall. This part NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: this chapter 6,146, 21,576 in total
Notes: Hooker!AU. Castiel's stuck in a crappy, pressurized job where he's unappreciated. He employs the services hooker to let off steam. Unlike the rest ( Read more... )

dean/castiel, supernatural, rated nc-17

Comments 49

mulder200 February 16 2011, 23:56:01 UTC

If this were a movie, he thinks, someone would start clapping, slowly. It would build and build, with the whole office whooping and cheering after him. The only thing that happens at Adler, Stein and Partners is complete silence, before a lone voice shouts, “Go Castiel!”

“Shut up, Shurley,” Zachariah barks.

LOL! Oh Chuck! You underdog you.

And way to go Cas! At least, he took his brother's advice to heart.

“You stupid asshole,” Dean whispers into his ear. “You stupid, fucking…I missed you, Cas, so fucking much. I thought I’d never eat, never sleep again. Couldn’t stop thinking about you. I haven’t…haven’t been out for days. This is the first time I’ve been able to…” He moves to rest his forehead against Castiel’s, closing his eyes. “I love you too, Cas. I love you so fucking much, it hurts, but if you try and…if you do anything like this again, I swear it’s over. I can’t take that again, can’t take feeling like that. You hear me ( ... )

carmexgirl February 17 2011, 20:27:28 UTC

Thanks! I didn't want it to be 'Happily ever after' because that wouldn't be true to their situation. They're on a more even footing now and can work on their issues.

I <3 Chuck!

gunsrlove February 17 2011, 00:34:36 UTC

I absolutely loved this from start to finish! Yay! I'm so glad they got back together at the end. I would have been heartbroken if they hadn't. I love the way Cas tells Zachariah off. His wording his awesome....and Chuck's lone voice of support as Cas leaves was hilarious! Thank you so much for a wonderful story!

carmexgirl February 17 2011, 20:29:13 UTC

Thank you so much! I think I would have been heartbroken too if they hadn't gotten together at the end. Cas certainly knows what to say when he needs to, and good old Chuck, supporting his friend.

Thanks for reading!

fannishliss February 17 2011, 01:31:13 UTC

this was really beautifully developed. I loved the Chuck cameo!

carmexgirl February 17 2011, 20:29:44 UTC

Thank you, I'm really pleased you liked it :D

marourin February 17 2011, 01:39:33 UTC

I'm so glad they have their happy ending~! I'd like to see a Coda where Gabe meets Dean XD

carmexgirl February 17 2011, 20:30:37 UTC

I'm sure Gabriel will make an impression on Dean...maybe not the right one, but an impression nonetheless! I think Dean and Cas deserve their happy ending.

siennis February 17 2011, 03:28:53 UTC

::squeals:: thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!

I was so nervous when I first say this was updated 'cause of the last chapter, but ohmygosh YAY!!!

♥♥♥

carmexgirl February 17 2011, 20:31:47 UTC

Yay! Glad I could make you happy :D They had to be together again in the end, didn't they? I mean, after everything they've been through, they deserve it.