Comments | carmencatalina: fic: that ends the night (SGU, PG-13)

carmencatalina

fic: that ends the night (SGU, PG-13)

Feb 15, 2010 21:50

Title: That ends the night.

Author: carmencatalina

Fandom: SGU
Pairing/Characters: Young/Rush, Scott, Greer, Brody, Eli, T.J.
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be.
Rating: PG-13, for language (seriously, my airmen swear like, well, sailors).
Spoilers: Through 1.10, “Justice”.

Author's Note: The ending of “give me your hand” is just that, an ending. But ( Read more... )

Comments 18

shena8 February 16 2010, 04:43:31 UTC

Yes, yes, yes. I *SO* needed this. I love how Young keeps his wits about him and how Rush's scientific mind still keeps going. Together, those two can't be beat. And I love how all of the crew work together and how they pull it off. Very nicely written. I could feel the cold reading it. Thanks for sharing!

carmencatalina February 16 2010, 15:08:24 UTC

I'm glad you liked it - thanks so much for commenting!

It's cold here where I am, so of course I made the poor lads suffer for it.

zoronoa February 16 2010, 08:29:59 UTC

Wooh! You did the sequel (and so fast, too). Mwahahahaha I love it!

carmencatalina February 16 2010, 15:10:28 UTC

Thank you! That's the fastest I've ever written anything, so I'm as surprised as anyone. Apparently, Lt. Scott is an impatient muse.

elliev February 16 2010, 10:51:28 UTC

I don't see any slash in there (if you intended it?) but I do see two very stubborn men. I liked this a lot. :)

carmencatalina February 16 2010, 15:14:43 UTC

I like to think my slash is a bit, well, aslant. You have to look carefully, or not, whatever your preference may be.

I do think they are moving towards something - and while I would love it to be sex, it might just be forgiveness. Which is ever so much harder than sex, you could have sex with someone you hate, but you have to give up hate to reach forgiveness. Or to be forgiven.

And apparently I ramble in my comment replies.

I'm glad you liked it!

nemo_r February 16 2010, 11:27:18 UTC

Ah this is gorgeous :) I'm so glad they're alive, I was really worried for Rush with the blinking life signal.

I like your Young characterisation, all stoic and tense. And AW carrying him in his arms at the end, the sweetie.

Also you actually made me like Scott... though I liked Greer more, he is awesome XD

carmencatalina February 16 2010, 15:17:15 UTC

Fanfiction is weird - I thought I didn't like Lt. Scott's character, but it was his voice in my head that inspired this story.

And, yes, Greer is awesome - I think his character has the potential to be really powerful on the show. And I love a man with a plan.

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carmencatalina February 16 2010, 15:17:47 UTC

I'm glad you like it!