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[carmelised]

Warnings: Needs beta-ing for continuity, and probably grammar. Except that I am brain dead, so please forgive. Sort-of character death

Comments

[orion117]

I enjoyed reading this through a second time, to see the early clues I'd missed the first time around - the Flame Alchemist absorbing flames, Hawkeye's rebirth, the razor stubble, and so forth. Very well done.

[misoka_strife]

That was so beautiful. :]