CM Fic: One Hundred and Twenty Minutes. Ch 6

Mar 10, 2012 23:12

Title: One Hundred and Twenty Minutes
Author: Carly Carter
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily/JJ (with a lot of bitter resentment and unresolved issues, but yes Emily/JJ)
Rating: PG ish for now
Disclaimer: I own nothing at all
Spoilers: Up to present day....set in early season 7 after Emily's return to the team.
Summary: As Emily struggles to integrate ( Read more... )

emily/jj, jennifer jareau, emily prentiss, criminal minds

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heart_never March 10 2012, 13:30:52 UTC
Oh man, this is so good!! can't wait to see where it goes!!

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carlyisnot March 12 2012, 05:23:05 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm so glad you enjoying the story, it's the reason I continue writing it :)

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restlesssoul03 March 10 2012, 13:31:08 UTC
oh man...That's it, I thought I had more to say, but apparently not. lol

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carlyisnot March 12 2012, 05:22:05 UTC
Aw thanks for reading, it means so much to me. I'm not sure if its a good thing I left you speechless or not lol. Hope you will enjoy the rest of the story...I suppose things can't get much worse from here, so it's time to fix everything now :)

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ayden07 March 11 2012, 09:00:42 UTC
so many emotions. I dont know if I should be mad at either one or just cry for both. This is a heartkiller!! I just cant imagine where its going next. Awesome!!

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carlyisnot March 12 2012, 05:20:56 UTC
Aw thank you so much for reading and for taking time to write a comment, I can't tell you how much it means to hear from people reading out there :) I am torn too, sometimes I want to slap them both, sometimes they just break my heart. There is lot of miscommunication and false assumptions between them. Too much unresolved fear and pain and bitterness, it clouds everything. But I know they can find their way through it, and be stronger by the end, both as individual people and as a couple.

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korenap March 11 2012, 13:15:53 UTC
Ouch, That hurt. Emily's compartments collapsing is not pretty. And JJ really doesn't seem to think she deserves what she wants either. It seems that JJ did make the right call given how hopeless Emily feels. And yet..she could have been wrong.

Hope you lead them out of this mess soon.

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carlyisnot March 12 2012, 05:18:14 UTC
Ah I love you, this is one of my favourite comments i've ever got. You just totally summed up exactly what I have been trying to say with all my words. So succinct and precise--- Emily's compartments collapsing, that's exactly it! And yeah, it's not pretty. I'm so gonna borrow your words and stick it in the story summary :) I will of course credit you for it.

Ah that's the thing, Emily is quite far gone, JJ may well have been right, Even Hotch seems to think so. But Morgan was there too and he wasn't bothered....I guess it's a matter of perspective and I'm not sure there will ever be agreement about it. But yes you can see why JJ may have thought she needed to intervene.

I am quite good, if i say so myself, at making the painful mess. Cleaning it up is a little bit harder, but Emily is such a great character to work with, and in fact the whole team are great characters, I'm sure I can bring Em and JJ to a better place by the end .

Thanks for the support and reading, it means a lot to know you are reading my story xxooxxoo
Carly

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southernstyle78 March 13 2012, 18:48:40 UTC
OMW! i'm not sure what to expect now... Happy thoughts!!!!

I think your writers block has left you, the way the words just flow perfectly into one another, it's like sitting with the Ladies while they belt it out....

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carlyisnot March 14 2012, 01:54:21 UTC
Awww hugs, thank you for such a beautiful comment. I'm so glad I am writing again, and so glad that you are enjoying the story. :)

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