69 Meme: Get Your Prompts Filled Here! (open)

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THE INTRODUCTIONSee, I’m writing this monstrosity of an epic Spones fic that is eating my soul and killing my heart little piece by little piece. Consequently, I miss writing short things. However, the kink meme has gotten so large and scary that I’m not feeling the urge to go digging through the unfilled archive (at least not yet since I’m

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[sangueuk]

nc-17, Kirk/McCoy, prompt: “Brush your teeth, your breath stinks!”
Warning: un-betaed so squint while you read and hopefully any errors will magically rearrange into seamless punctuation.

Funny How Smells Take You BackThe first thing McCoy hears is the rumble of traffic and he feels a faint ache in his bladder

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[sangueuk]

His own face still aches from the forced smiles and he’s a little in awe of this young man who calls his friend, how he didn’t seem to run out of energy or run out of charm all night, how he bounced from one party guest to another while McCoy watched him from afar, watched as he knocked back the beer, yep - there was a whiff of that too - McCoy thinks as he reaches round Kirk’s hip to grasp his very erect cock - licks at Kirk’s earlobe and gently, easily tugs. He’s given up on his own, needs to pee too badly.

“You still asleep, sweetheart?” he purrs into Kirk’s neck, pulling him closer.

“Uh-hum…”

Kirk’s rolling and grinding the length of his body against McCoy whose hooked his leg over him, climbing closer, rubbing harder and the first, very awake gasp bears a trace of the smoked salmon he’d watched Jim sliding into his mouth at the buffet table while smoozing some admiral, while all the while Kirk had been eye-fucking McCoy, chewing open-mouthed, making even snacking look like something that should carry a warning

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God, that's so damn hot I feel bad for not including sex in mine.

Damn.

COLD SHOWER.

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[sangueuk]

Thanks - you've made my day!

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[cards_slash]

And so the great spirit of 69 lives on...

Srsly tho, I've read this more than once now and the image that I find hottest (I might be odd) is:

Just one more minute, he thinks, winching open an eye and taking in the t-shirt clad back next to him. The fabric’s still pushed up under Jim’s armpits from when McCoy fucked him last night - didn’t have time to take it off.

I blame my kink for clothes...

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[awarrington]

Ooooo! Hot and steamy sex! Fabulous!

This is a lovely vignette and beautifully written. I think one of the (many) things I really like about it, is that it's so masculine in its feel.

the little happy purrs might be a clue that Captain Erection is awake

LOL!!

Wonderful!

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[kilala10]

Hot Damn..

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[sangueuk]

*puts the air-con back on for you*

Glad you liked it!

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[byandby]

Damn. *fans self*

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[sangueuk]

Here, take my fan. ;D

Thanks for reading!

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[rubynye]

That was some gloriously sensory writing. *applauds*

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[sangueuk]

sensory writing

You noticed! I'm am a bit smell obssessed - one of the many reasons I relate to my dog so well!

Glad you liked and thanks for taking the trouble to comment - lurve comments!