Challenge 12: Bio Poem

Dec 01, 2017 00:50

Challenge 12

Description Write a BIO POEM based on any character. Earn extra points by commenting on other's poems!

Points Earn a total of 41 points.
+20 for writing your poem
+5 points each for reading/commenting on someone else's poem (up to 4 comments = 20 points)
+1 for sigtag when submitting
Due Date Dec 15 at Midnight.
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BioPoem catko December 4 2017, 07:56:16 UTC
Fandom character: Astrid Farnsworth, Fringe

Astrid
Bright, brave, occasionally badass
Nurturing daughter to Stephen; like a daughter to Walter,
Animal lover, also science, truth, and justice
She’s felt frightened, furious, and fond
Through everything, the thing she seemed to fear most was losing those she loved.
Really believed in a brighter, more humane future.
It’s Boston where she lived, but we don’t know where she’s from.
Farnsworth

RE: the acrostic, remember one of Astrid's key qualities was Walter's ability to call her by many different names...

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RE: BioPoem blue_sunflowers December 4 2017, 08:01:45 UTC
Heh. I would have said she felt frustrated with Walter :) Your poem describes the essence of Astrid very completely. I feel my poem isn't up to the spirit of the challenge as I realize now it's fairly perfunctory and I never thought to make it clever like with an acrostic, or flowing phrases.

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RE: BioPoem catko December 5 2017, 10:20:51 UTC
Heh thanks, I had to do something to jazz it up, rather dull otherwise.

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RE: BioPoem meridian_rose December 4 2017, 10:41:43 UTC
I love the bonus acrostic, very in keeping with Fringe! I loved Astrid the most and this poem captures her essence well.

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RE: BioPoem catko December 5 2017, 10:21:08 UTC
Thanks and I didn't think of the acrostic as being Fringe-y!

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RE: BioPoem seraphina_snape December 10 2017, 16:26:25 UTC
I don't know Fringe (or the character), but I think it's really cool you managed to give us double the poem: the bio poem plus the acrostic. *g*

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RE: BioPoem catko December 10 2017, 18:48:28 UTC
Ah you're not a Fringe watcher. Hmmm wonder if you'd like it. Thanks for the comment!

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RE: BioPoem tarlanx December 10 2017, 22:03:54 UTC
Astrid was a great character and I love all her attributes brought into your poem.

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