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carcrashheart_8

It Was Only a Kiss

Dec 29, 2009 02:14

Title: It Was Only a Kiss [One-Shot]
Author: carcrashheart_8
Pairings: YeWook
Rating: R [sexuality]
Summary: A kiss between Yesung and Ryeowook leads to something both unexpected and wonderful
Disclaimer: Title taken from "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers

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yewook is creepy love, fanfiction makes fandom a lot more fun, ryeowook is gonna be the death of me, super junior is made of crack and ghei, yesung is creepy

Comments 16

urei_sachi December 29 2009, 10:36:13 UTC

Hahaha I totally love how awkward they are. I &hearts this ;D

carcrashheart_8 January 16 2010, 06:50:48 UTC

Sorry for the late reply ^^;

They are awkward together :P but it's cute. I'm glad you loved it! Thanks for reading :)

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carcrashheart_8 January 16 2010, 06:51:10 UTC

Thank you for reading :)

ddangkkoma December 29 2009, 15:02:09 UTC

good attempt i think dear. a bit rushed at the end but you'll def get better as you write them more

carcrashheart_8 January 16 2010, 06:52:09 UTC

Sorry for the late reply ^^;

Yes, it was rushed, wasn't it? I was going to keep going but I was afraid of making it more awkward @_@;;

Thank you for your comment and thank you for reading :) I'll try and write better YeWook in the future!

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carcrashheart_8 January 16 2010, 06:52:26 UTC

Thanks, bb :)

tehgirlwonder December 29 2009, 18:49:43 UTC

RYEOWOOK IS SO CUTE AND PRECIOUS.
GAH.

Who wouldn't want alone time with Yesung? My goodness<3

You should write for of their regular night encounters~! ;D

carcrashheart_8 January 16 2010, 06:53:26 UTC

HE IS. HE'S TOO CUTE ;__;

Anyone who wouldn't want to be alone with Yesung is crazy :P he's got 'sex' written all over him! /biased

Oooh maybe I should :D let's hope it will be a lot less awkwardly written ^^;

Thanks for reading! :D