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It's the End of a Broken Heart

Dec 26, 2008 01:40

Title: It's the End of a Broken Heart [Chapter 5]
Author: carcrashheart_8
Pairings: RyoJun, RyoKame, RyoDa, RyoUchi, RyoMassu, RyoTego, TegoMass, RyoPin [friendship], Jun/??
Rating: R [for language and smut]
Summary: Ryo is involved with five men, all at once. Two are in love with him, two are using him, and one hates his guts. No matter how his “ ( Read more... )

ryouchi is drunk love, long live tegoslut, fanfiction makes fandom a lot more fun, matsujun is prettier than you, ryojun is sadistic love, ryoda is snarky love, uchi is prettier than most girls, tegoslut and massu-chan, ryotego is pedo love, massu's smile brings puppies to life, ryomass is wtf love, ryo is 4 feet of snark, ueda is nothing but lips

Comments 21

loonykatt December 26 2008, 11:34:52 UTC

wow u update so fast! *muack* ILU

at this point " “Have a seat, Ryotan--Ryo,” Tegoshi said, gesturing for Ryo to sit on the couch. " I practically laugh out loud and shout " confession time " hahaha...
they r sick, both of them.. but i like.. XDDD
and i'm glad that the other 2 man did't end for ryo, u hv a very interesting plot..
n jun too.. XDDD looking forward to ur next! i definitely enjoy this! <3

carcrashheart_8 December 28 2008, 06:07:06 UTC

You're welcome ^^ I'll try and update the next chapter really soon

I'm glad you find it interesting! Thanks for reading and commenting :]

raixas December 26 2008, 12:25:48 UTC

aww~
happy tegomass, uchi n ueda??
poor ryo??
n inou mao~??
i'm looking forward for the next chapter~!

carcrashheart_8 December 28 2008, 06:07:28 UTC

I'll be sure to update soon ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

salwaphoenix December 26 2008, 12:35:08 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHH XD

I'm sorry.. It's just LOL XD

Who better to break Ryo's heart other than Mao ne XD
OMG, ILUSM!!!

Take that Ryo, beat that if you can XD
*which I so hope you would!*

carcrashheart_8 December 28 2008, 06:08:11 UTC

LOL I'm sure adding in Mao was completely unexpected for everyone ^^; but I'm glad it made you laugh XD

Thanks for reading and commenting

creamy_amande December 26 2008, 13:52:37 UTC

Wooho...and here I thought Ryo could be having the most awesome date with Jun..But I already knew it wouldn't be. It was too good to be true! Though I have 2 suppositions of what could follow. But I'll see what comes next to clear everything. I hope everything will finally turn ok for everyone.

carcrashheart_8 December 28 2008, 06:08:54 UTC

Lol sorry to disappoint you about Ryo's date >.>;; lol I'll be sure to update soon so you'll know what happens next ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting

arashiaddict246 December 26 2008, 14:09:12 UTC

aww crap
crap crap crap crap crap crap crap
poor ryo :(
can't wait for more!!!

carcrashheart_8 December 28 2008, 06:09:11 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting :]