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simplytoopretty January 14 2009, 19:57:54 UTC
Great update! I was so happy to see a new update. I just had to read even though I really, really shouldn't be reading fanfiction right now.

I really liked the end of this chapter. Because Chloe has a plan and I knew she would come up with something. Gabe's reaction should be good. The next chapter with teh king and the bracelets should be awesome. I'm looking forward to it; and I'll be waiting patiently.

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carcassi January 14 2009, 23:39:38 UTC
Aww, thanks, Simplytoopretty, I really appreciate the feedback! After seven months, it doesn't look as if too many people care about how this story ends, but I'm glad YOU do, and I hope you like the little twist with the bracelet in the next chapter! :)

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simplytoopretty January 15 2009, 01:12:37 UTC
I do love this story. I do care how it ends and I want everyone to read it and leave you feedback. I recced it directly to sv_ledger so maybe some others will see it.

(Btw, you can use Melissa over Simplytoopretty if you want.)

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carcassi January 15 2009, 01:25:22 UTC
I appreciate the rec, Melissa. :) (I'm Debbie, BTW.) Sorry for the moping! People read what they want to read, after all. And I write what I want to write. Thanks for the encouragement, it cheered me up a lot!

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angelbsb January 14 2009, 21:47:10 UTC
yay yay yay yay it's back. oh man i hope kal does not hate chloe . i can not wait to read more.

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carcassi January 14 2009, 23:40:21 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! :)

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red_81 January 15 2009, 04:47:33 UTC
I love the relationship that you have between Gabe and Chloe. And hopefully the king recovers in enough time to confront the prince.

I'm so glad for the update, I can't wait to hear from Kal see how he's doing. I hope that Chloe's plan doesn't backfire. Can't wait to read more.

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carcassi January 15 2009, 18:28:35 UTC
Aww, thank you, glad you liked! And now that I'm back on track with this fic, the updates will be coming more frequently. :)

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h2osprincess January 15 2009, 05:33:17 UTC
I'm so glad to see an update to this one. Can't wait to see where you take us!

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carcassi January 15 2009, 18:29:38 UTC
I'm glad you're still following it! Thanks v. much for the feedback! :)

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megamom2 January 15 2009, 11:45:19 UTC
carcassi January 15 2009, 18:31:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm looking forward to finishing it so you can do just that. *g* From now on, updates should be coming faster. :)

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