SV Fic: If the Shoe Fits (Cinderella!Chlark, PG), CONCLUSION

Sep 14, 2007 18:15

I know Friday evening's not the best time for posting fic, but I promised the conclusion to you guys as soon as possible, and I just finished this ( Read more... )

chlois fic, isf, fairytale chlark fic, chlark fiction, het fiction

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margroks September 15 2007, 00:31:25 UTC
"Right name, wrong girl." Exactly! And I loved Perry saying Clark needed different spectacles!

ANd wasn't Lana her old bitchy self? I think you've done a perfect job of melding Smallville with the Cinderella tale. Frankly, I'm delighted it ran long! I think it had to be this length to get everything said as needed. Bravo, Lady Carcassi!

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carcassi September 15 2007, 00:59:49 UTC
"Right name, wrong girl." Exactly!

Hee! I thought of you when I wrote that. And, yes, I think it pretty much says it all, at least as far as I'm concerned.

ANd wasn't Lana her old bitchy self?

It doesn't take much to transform SV!Lana into the perfect evil stepsister. *G* I *did* say I was going to stay true to SV canon. :)

Thanks so much, Marg, as always, for reading and commenting!

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kissme_myfool September 15 2007, 01:02:16 UTC
That was great! hehe I absolutely loved that Lana was the traitor, fits her perfectly. All the chlark/superman/dp stuff was great!

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carcassi September 15 2007, 01:22:42 UTC
Thanks, Sandra!! Glad you liked it. :)

Lana, IMO, is the perfect evil stepsister. And I've always been a huge Perry White fan (well, except for the Frank Langella version :P), so I couldn't resist including him, and then, of course, he had to have the last say. :)

(P.S. Would you mind it if I asked you for an icon for this fic? *Smiles winningly*)

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kissme_myfool September 15 2007, 01:56:28 UTC
:D

totally. me too, comic!perry is my favorite :)

ask away (and point me to a cap/pic) :D

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carcassi September 15 2007, 18:33:57 UTC
Eeee, thank you!! :)

I've gone through a few of yours and Chiri's caps/pics, and there are so many good ones it's hard to decide. *g* The one in this icon *points upward* has a kind of fairy-tale look to it, and of course the "Vessel" kiss is made-to-order. I went through Chiri's screencaps on her DD site, and came up with this one: http://chiriru.net/smvl/dduo/522/vessel550.jpg. (It's pretty dark, but I've seen what you, Chiri and others have done with that scene, and I was really impressed.) I don't have too many caps of Season 6, but wasn't there a Chlark hug, or a good Chlark two-shot, in "Freak" or "Progeny"?

Any of the above would be great, or anything else you think might fit. (I thought of the "Tempest" kiss, too, which would've been perfect except Clark's in a tux, not red-and-blue.)

Again, thanks, Sandra!! *Hugs*

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lilbreck September 15 2007, 02:21:27 UTC
The mid-air waltz was priceless! I simply adored this story.

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carcassi September 15 2007, 18:37:13 UTC
Thank you!!!

*Bows before icon* (YB: The only bald ruler sexier than Lex Luthor. *g*)

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lilbreck September 15 2007, 19:00:24 UTC
YB was one of my first major celeb crushes.

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that was great angelbsb September 15 2007, 02:33:35 UTC
that was great . i loved how you had lois stand up for chloe against lana . and how you put lana with metoro infected lex lol. and how perry knew clark was superman by his glasses lol.

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Re: that was great carcassi September 15 2007, 18:42:48 UTC
Thank you for getting me to write it! I think it turned out to be about 15 times longer than my original drabble. :P I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your feedback. :)

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Re: that was great carcassi September 15 2007, 19:20:38 UTC
Er, make that *150* times longer. I'm math-challenged today. *Blushes*

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bluediamond421 September 16 2007, 18:25:38 UTC
Wow, this was amazing. I loved how you twisted the shoe-contest to fit this story. And I loved all the Chlark, especially this part: She stared at this man, who’d done so much good for so many people in the kingdom, and was shocked to see that he was looking at her as if he’d just discovered the most precious thing in the universe. And evil!Lana is always a bonus. And, like everything else, I think "Right name, wrong girl" is a great summary of the situation. And Perry is made of win. :D I'm so glad it was longer than you planned.

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carcassi September 16 2007, 20:22:56 UTC
I'm very happy you enjoyed it!! It took a while to work out how to adapt the shoe contest, but once I did, I knew Lana was tailor-made as the evil snitch. *grins* And I adore Perry too. Of course, I couldn't resist giving him the last word. :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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bluediamond421 September 16 2007, 20:48:48 UTC
You're welcome. :D And where I said "like everything else", it was supposed to say "like everyone else." I just realized my mistake.

I love Chlark and Chlois fics. They make me squee.

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