Fic: "Innocent" (Harry Potter) Chapter One

[carboninsolence]

Title: Innocent
Fandom(s): Harry Potter
Characters: Albus Severus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, James Sirius Potter, Lily Potter, Rose Weasley
Pairings: Albus Severus Potter/Scorpius Malfoy, Albus Severus Potter/OMC, Albus Severus Potter/OFC, Scorpius Malfoy/OFC
Rating: NC-17

Genre: Romance, Angst, Hurt/Comfort

Comments

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[my_thestral]

I like the idea of you taking on the next generation. We really don't know that much about them, do we, save for the names, and it must be interesting writing them "from the scratch", cause you can pretty much mould them into anything your imagination allows. :)
I like your writing style, it's sort of fresh and it makes me think you might be a young person, cause I, for the love of god, can't produce the accurate wording, nor can I put myself in the shoes of the young ones with ease. Well done, here.
I'm looking forward to the follow-up. I'm going to check your previous work in the mean time, so - no pressure. ;)

Re: :)

[carboninsolence]

Thanks :) I haven't actually got most of my previous work on here yet but I will be putting it up shortly. I'm actually on chapter nine of this right now.

I am young (17) and I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks!

It was great!

[anonymous]

I think the concept seems great and there is nothing wrong with your writing! I'm looking forward to more and to see how the story unfolds!

[anonymous]

Very intriguing, post more chapters please!

[anonymous]

I have read and reread this so many times I am a huge albus/scorpius fan and can't wait till you get to their part, love it please continue its just too good not to!