i've been thinkin' about all those things you said

[carbonics]

fandom: one direction
pairing: harry/louis
word count: ~2900
warnings: soft drug use, totally pwp and i'm not going to apologise for it
summary: slide, slide. smoking, drinking, fucking. loosely based on this post.
notes: dedicated to jamie because well she deserves it frankly

( i've been thinkin' about all those things we did )posted in my fic

Comments

[carbonics]

ty babe ♥

[tracedust]

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE.

i love the ~atmosphere of it, like i could FEEL the chill in the air (& i love that you used the day in germany) and it was sort of bittersweet AND just plain sweet? and kind of desperate and sad too and then like perfectly dirty and hot and idk it has ALL OF THE THINGS. and ugh all the dom-y louis bits killed me because it's just so NATURAL. and the drinking of the champagne managed to be like the hottest thing i've ever read and idek.

basically i love you a lot.

[carbonics]

eeeee jamie i'm so glad you liiiiiked it, i loved writing this one a lot so tyvm for the compliments i graciously accept them all ;) NATURAL IS WHAT I AIM FOR i can't do poetic at all really so i like to get down and dirty with the characters, really feel stuff instead idk. and i'm so happy the chill came across?? idek why i wanted it to be a thing but i did and i ran with it so yeah, analyse that literature students

yeah but basically i love you more so ♥

[dangerbears]

omg i wrote that submit to jamie and
YES
THIS WAS FANTASTIC
thank you so much for writing this much more wonderfully than i could!

[carbonics]

weeeeeeeeeeee yay i am so glad you like it but PISH OMG I AM READING BLACKJACKS/MANY MOONS AND LITERALLY DYING YOU ARE A GODDESS AND I AM NOT WORTHY

[agnes_wonka7]

Congratulations! this was amazingly written! xD
Though I rather see top!Harry, it's nice to see the couple switch :)

Keep on writing like this! :))))

[carbonics]

maaaaaan I have so many sub feelings about Harry I don't think I could ever write him topping, sorry! But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! Thanks for reading!

[mowglimoonshado]

shit I didn't comment on this what is wrong with me

I LOVED IT. It was really beautiful, the sensuality and atmosphere were just so perfect.

[carbonics]

thank you so much!