and i could write a song a hundred miles long

Aug 08, 2012 03:35

fandom: one direction
pairing: harry/louis
word count: ~2100
warnings: unimaginative writing
summary: cover me up, cuddle me in. so harry's pretty tall and louis, well, isn't.
notes: dedicated to jamie and selina for generally being lovely and amazing and coercing me into sharing this. it's kind of all over the place and probably not my best but it ( Read more... )

type: fic, otp: harry/louis, fandom: one direction

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carbonics August 9 2012, 10:13:33 UTC
thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it!

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carbonics August 9 2012, 10:16:10 UTC
ASDFFGHASDF SELIIINAAAAA

oh my god i just love niall so much, he is a joy to write!

lbr that's my favourite line too /preens

aaaaahhhhhh okay! only if you write more too b/c i love your stuff so much omg

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tracedust August 8 2012, 17:40:01 UTC
OK WHAT

I DEMAND THAT YOU WRITE MORE

this is seriously so great. i love the intimacy of it, like you spotlighted all these little private moments despite how ridiculous and totally not private their lives are. it almost makes it MORE intimate, how they're able to just zero in on each other. IDK MAN IT WAS GOOD.

your louis killed me omg. THIS ENTIRE THING:
People are shouting their names and waving their cameras around and Louis is tired, hates this. It's morning and he hasn't eaten, slept alone last night because Harry was marathoning cartoons with Niall until stupid o'clock and had fallen asleep on the sofa in his room. He wants to curl into himself, get these people away, away from him ( ... )

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carbonics August 9 2012, 10:23:27 UTC
OK WHAT

LIKE OK I WILL OMG

omg i loooooooooove louis and ughhghhhh i'm so glad you think i got him right ♥♥

NO YOU DID NOT JUST QUOTE MY OWN FIC AT ME JAMIIIEEEEE

also sidenote: NEW PICTURES FROM TODAYYYYY OMGGGGGGG HOW TINY DOES LOUIS LOOK IN THEM


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tracedust August 9 2012, 20:26:46 UTC
OMG IKR HEIGHT DIFFERENCEEEEEEE BECAUSE YOU USUALLY HE STANDS AS STRAIGHT AS POSSIBLE LIKE HE'S TRYING TO GET EVERY LAST INCH IN BUT HE LOOKS ALL RELAXED HERE AND OMG HARRY IS SO MUCH TALLER AND ;______;

this photo made me oddly emotional

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hazelnut917 August 8 2012, 18:28:03 UTC
ASDHKJLJF THIS WAS SUPER SWEET AND I LOVED IT A LOT
your niall is absolute perfection
and augh sappy harry and insecure lou i just cant you write them so so well <3

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carbonics August 9 2012, 10:25:11 UTC
SADFFSDFGS THANK YOU i'm so glad you think so!

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kay18jay August 8 2012, 19:12:05 UTC
I whole heartedly agree with valentinec, that was my favorite line as well, singing like he fucks, (ragged and velvet and melting). it has become my canon as well!
Good god, I am so happy I found this fic. I'm sitting here reading it, wailing "the feels, omg, the feels!" These are my favorite kinds of fics. Fics that are thick and rich with the thoughts and feelings of the characters. Your Louis and Harry are so spot on with my head canon it's not even funny.
Harry as a hulking, long and lithe man-boy do things to me I can't even begin to explain.
Thanks so much for writing, and for sharing it with us!
~Jane

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carbonics August 9 2012, 10:29:32 UTC
omg i have ~contributed~ to people's headcanons this makes me so happpy omg

oh they are??? amazing! i'm so glad you think the characterization's okay, it's the most difficult thing to nail!

well thank you so much for reading! these are my favourite kinds of fic to write ♥

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