Fic: Sometimes I think it's a sin, when I feel like I'm winning when I'm losing again

[caranfindel]

Length: About 2200 words
Rating: Gen, PG for language
Warnings: None
Characters: Bobby Singer, Sam Winchester. Not appearing in this story: Sam's soul.
Spoilers: Through S8

Comments

[mdlaw]

At least this makes sense, m :)

[ex1led_nyer]

First off I have to tell you that I was playing this song this morning. The Chris Collingwood cover.

Also, great job! I appreciate you fixing the problem of Bobby not telling Dean about Sam, because that was just so wrong. Of course Bobby would have told Dean, but you came up with a plausible reason why he didn't. I don't think much can fix Taxi Driver, but at least you put it in some sort of context.

You really captured Bobby here -- his voice, his speech patterns, his thought process. Well done!

[caranfindel]

Thank you! I'll have to find that cover - I love Gordon Lightfoot's version.

[caranfindel]

Anything makes more sense than canon! :-/

[fireheart13]

really liked this. great bobby pov. ahh, what if/if only...

[caranfindel]

thanks!

[madebyme_x]

You really captured Bobby's voice so well here, and I really appreciated how you addressed the issue of him not telling Dean about Sam returning from hell, for me this feels like a much more believable turn of events.

Thank you for sharing :)

[caranfindel]

Thank you! It was just something I really needed to do for myself. :-)

[ameliacareful]

I love Bobby's voice in this. Most of the time I don't like first person fanfic but you avoided all the Bobby cliches and caught the cadences. Lovely work.

[caranfindel]

Thank you! It may be the only Bobby story in existence that doesn't use the word "idjit." ;-)

[ameliacareful]

Or even "balls".

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