Fic: But if you try sometimes

[caranfindel]

This isn't actually a new fic - I was messing with my tags and I realized I had posted this one directly to spnspiration instead of just posting a link, so I decided to repost to my own journal just to make sure it doesn't go away.

But if you try sometimes
Length: About 1100 words
Rating: PG-13 for language
Characters: Dean Winchester, omniscient narrator

Comments

[roxymissrose]

omgosh, I just want to take this story and shake it until the ending drops out--though either way, it's not a good one, is it?

So good!!

[fufaraw]

Oh. Ouch. Hmm.

Well done, you.

[caranfindel]

Thanks!

[caranfindel]

I mean, are there ANY good endings on this show?

[fanspired]

Somehow, the omniscient narrator's voice sounds an awful lot like Julian Richings to me . . .

Excellent writing.

[caranfindel]

I did write the narrator as Death, and you’re the first person to notice! I guess I didn’t do a great job. :-/

[madebyme_x]

I love love love this. The open ending feel, and the strength of character you achieved in the voice too. And what a great twist of an episode that I've never seen before!!! Perfect. Now, about what's under that napkin....

(I was just about to say what fanspired above... the voice sounds sounds like Death to me too!)

[caranfindel]

Thank you. And yes, I did write the narrator as Death!

[marciaelena]

Gorgeous. One could say that this is a thought experiment in quantum mechanics, much like Schrodinger's cat. But I dare say we all know what is (or rather, what *isn't*) under that napkin.

[mdlaw]

Oh!  That's just wrong!     m.   \o/