Erasure: The Long Path

Feb 02, 2010 18:08

Title: The Long Path
Erased by: caramelsilver
Original text by: lizzie_marie_23 | Unless
Fandom: Doctor Who

Come with me
I can't. It's just
somebody
he left. She mattered.

The first to turn down an offer
Amazing Grace
Still, there was past disappointments in the universe

people dressed as yelling
representation and rights.
One man asked, «This wouldn't be about chance?»
It's about being controlled by an ocean
liberty sighed
forgotten surperior act.
Pity about the rejection
revolting against Time

Suddenly, a tall man in an overcoat
That was definitively possible
his inferno
his redemption
He had to, by order
I request an invasion

Please yourself.
You should know that
I'm your future
I got saved from the clockwork
and met a horse.

Take the easy path now to waste

Nice man, him
Not stunningly handsome but
nice.

He opened the door, turned around
you'd never make it back
What are you even doing here

I've been traveling for years
Don't you remember?

A minute to talk to myself
and he closed the doors
her stunned face
must have gotten
far off course
in the wrong time?

He rushed out
yelling
It's been so long
I took the long path
but I'm here
now

erasure poetry, fandom: doctor who

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