(grim_lupine, you should totally do this one. I just wanted to give girl Ed a shot.)
Ed has nimble fingers and a quick mind, a clever tongue and more than one way (it's more like a thousand) to make her points. In Calormene, where women are expected to be beautiful and silent, she stands out against the crowds.
She cuts her hair short and takes the whispers in stride.
BETSY!! You write an awesome girl!Ed! Like whoa, nice! The whole piece just oozes Calormene mystique and awesomeness. I especially like the last line. &hearts
Oh be still my heart, how I love it! This is brilliance. I love it all, you describe her so well. I especially like the part where she meets their gaze without shame. Awesomeness! &hearts
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Ed has nimble fingers and a quick mind, a clever tongue and more than one way (it's more like a thousand) to make her points. In Calormene, where women are expected to be beautiful and silent, she stands out against the crowds.
She cuts her hair short and takes the whispers in stride.
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