Original Fiction: Each Mirroring the Other

[caramelsilver]

I've written original fiction. I am so surprised at myself you have no idea. And it's probably not so good, and I have no idea how much sense it'll make to people who are not in my head but... I'm gonna post it here anyway.

It's written for this prompt over at The Fall Fandom Free-for-All: Fic: Original Fiction. Something involving a BFF dynamic

Comments

[caramelsilver]

Oh thank you so much for telling me! I'll go fix that right now. And I'm really glad you liked it.

[insane_duckfish]

Oooooooooh this is wonderful! You should definitely write more, I love these characters and I want to know more about them! I'm so glad you felt inspired by my prompt and thank you for taking the time to write this! It's perfectly understandable and it really intrigues me. :D

Lilly's love for her gun was so cute! I'm glad she got a new one.

[caramelsilver]

Oh! I'm glad you liked it =D I really do think I'll write more. They came so easily into my head and they're demanding I write more so... (do you want a link next time I post something?)

Yes, she does love her gun. (I have a thing for guns and knives in my fiction. Which is why they both own knives too :P)

[insane_duckfish]

:D I am so glad I have given you the original fiction bug! XDD I would love a link next time you post. Actually, if you want - and don't feel obliged to take me up on this - I am happy to beta for you. My email is speaknoevilk at yahoo dot com dot au. But only if you want. This isn't a comment on your writing but I know how hard it can be to find a beta, especially for original fiction.

[be_themoon]

ohhh, nice! I really got to like the characters in such a short time, and even though the bad guy was really shadowy and unknown, the tension was still quite real. and traveling! you know how I love traveling stories. I love how adorably close they are, it's fabulous. really nice job! I'd love to see more in this 'verse.

[caramelsilver]

*Grins* So glad you liked it! (and that it was understandable to read.)

Yeah, um... I don't know who the bad guy *is* so he ended up deep into the shadows. I shall work on him and next time I write he will be more fleshed out I think.

Yes! They are total travellers. I love the idea of them just jumping on a train (or steal a car) when they get bored and want to get away.

Totally writing more. They won't leave me alone yet.

Thank you sooo much for reading *and* telling me you liked it. Real confidence booster! *hugs*