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lizzie_marie_23 December 1 2010, 16:53:53 UTC
Narnia, Susan, not enough sky to fill my dreams

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be_themoon December 1 2010, 23:43:51 UTC
The sky of England is a muddy gray today, in defiance of all that Susan wants the day to hold, and she sighs and fetches her umbrella. Perhaps a raincoat - but no, she doesn't want to cover up the brightness of her purple dress, not when she's meeting up with her family after they finish their madcap quest.

It's still raining when she arrives at the station, and she gets mud on her dress as she starts running when she sees the smoke.

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lizzie_marie_23 December 2 2010, 06:08:26 UTC
Oh this is perfect! I read the part about the "madcap quest" and then I knew what was going to happen next, but then the last sentence is so wonderful.

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caramelsilver December 2 2010, 13:02:47 UTC
Chills! This really seriously gave me chills! Good job :D

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wingedflight21 December 5 2010, 02:45:15 UTC
Waaaaaah! So sad, yet so perfect. Gah.

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