Fic: Company Between Us

[caramelsilver]

Title: Company Between Us
Author: caramelsilver
Fandom: Narnia
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 7400
Characters: Susan Pevensie and Edmund Pevensie
Warnings: Spoilers through all seven books. Smoking and drinking. One or two swear words.

Summary: Susan is all alone after the death of her family and Edmund thinks she needs a little help living her life again.

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Comments

[bookaddict88]

This is beautiful!

I just have a quick grammar comment, since it's something that threw me out of your otherwise lovely story: "he didn't understand her emotions as good as he used too" should be "as well as he used to."

[caramelsilver]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Oh, wow, should have caught that one as well. I'll go fix it right away. Thank you for pointing it out <3

[katakokk]

Oh, YES. <33333 I apologize for not having read this sooner, it is so great.

This is a really interesting Susan post-LB fic! I've seen fic where Edmund or one of the other Pevensies survives as well, but never ghost!Edmund. SO GOOD.

Also, your Edmund is perfect. And I think he's a smoker in my headcanon now, because of you.

Anyways, GREAT JOB. This is awesome! :)

[caramelsilver]

Aww! Thank you, Kathy! I'm so glad you liked it. This is one of my favorite fics I've ever written, so I get so happy when other people like it too. &hearts

ghost!Edmund has been bothering me for a while, so it was great to be able to write it down.

Also, your Edmund is perfect. --THANK YOU! Best compliment, ever.

And I think he's a smoker in my headcanon now, because of you. -- Um... Sorry?

Thank you so much for this lovely review. It made my day. &hearts

[katakokk]

And I think he's a smoker in my headcanon now, because of you. -- Um... Sorry?

Hahaha, don't be, it's not a bad thing. I just tend to gank things from other people's headcanons when they make SO MUCH SENSE. Plus, the idea of Edmund smoking is kind of hot. ;)

[caramelsilver]

:D:D Good to hear. I find it totally hot too. It's a fiction kink I have. :D:D