I promised you I'd leave a comment before leaving for two months so here I am. It took me so long to post my review because I was so so so sad about this, and a bit upset, I hate you for that.
The way you described everyone in this story fluctuated flawlessly with the course of the plot. Minseok first, with his life and the pros he obviously had while working with Luhan, but also the cons of doing so, it felt like there was a "Luhan is mortal and dangerous" implied in those paragraphs, and hell yeah he was. But I also loved how you started this, with Jongdae and Minseok and all about the first scene (which was perfect), you made me cry with that beginning tbh. And that feeling of standing in the hall of fame then decay to the lowest mortal level made me cringe as I was reading this it made me so :( I wanted to pat and hug Minseok all the time but also Jongdae and I'm :(:( at Jongdae too because why :(
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i can't omg this is so beautiful but sO HEARTBREAKING ;A; your writing is so flawless why wayve why wh y
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THIS WAS SUCH A PAIN TO TYPE like omfg imagine if it were real (tho i doubt it bc there'd be plenty of loopholes here)
SOBS THANK YOU ; A ;
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Overwhelming.
I promised you I'd leave a comment before leaving for two months so here I am. It took me so long to post my review because I was so so so sad about this, and a bit upset, I hate you for that.
The way you described everyone in this story fluctuated flawlessly with the course of the plot. Minseok first, with his life and the pros he obviously had while working with Luhan, but also the cons of doing so, it felt like there was a "Luhan is mortal and dangerous" implied in those paragraphs, and hell yeah he was. But I also loved how you started this, with Jongdae and Minseok and all about the first scene (which was perfect), you made me cry with that beginning tbh. And that feeling of standing in the hall of fame then decay to the lowest mortal level made me cringe as I was reading this it made me so :( I wanted to pat and hug Minseok all the time but also Jongdae and I'm :(:( at Jongdae too because why :(
Congrats on the fic, you ruined me with it, thx.
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