23 (au)

[caramel_coated]

I wrote this when I was anticipating the arrival of my lovers... ♥

your love hits my heart like a spear
and        I cry long into the night,
"whyfore we have this plight!"
sickness clouds my head
but do               not dread
for I will take some Tylenol
and we can dance among the pilenol*(*LOLOL. Pilenol is a flower I made up

Comments

[brazilian_mocha]

That...that was, uh, fucking awesome, babe! Yeah, I see some hardcore poetic gold there! Tensai nothin'! That's gonna make you famous like Lord Byron and shit with stuff like that! No wait. He died when he was, like, 30 or something. You don't wanna be like him.

[OOC: While AU!Jackal is normally all too eager to say what's on his mind, he doesn't want an angry beatnik on his hands if he were to give his brutally honest opinion. ^^;]

[caramel_coated]

Jackal, Jackal, Jackal
round head
great in bed~
if I died at thirty,
your life would be dirty.
die with me ;]

[brazilian_mocha]

Uh, I don't wanna die when I'm thirty either, babe. 'Live fast and die young' sounds fun and all that shit, but how about we both just keep having fun while staying alive instead? More years means more time to do whatever the fuck we want. Like getting even better in bed. Though glad to hear you approving of what I got going so far~ ;D

[demoneyesakaya]

I liked them! ^^ I like that you made some of the text red in the first one, that was good!

[ooc: Oh Akaya, so eager to make his lovers happy. ^^;;]