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captainlogic

Fic: Fishing is a four letter word Pt. 2

Oct 12, 2009 20:09

Title:: Fishing is a four letter word PT. 2
Author: captainlogic
Summary:Jack takes Daniel on a vacation that’s out of this world
Word Count:15,000
Rating: nC-17
Disclaimer:None of Stargate belongs to me, only in my sordid dreams
Written For: justhuman
Prompt: vacation but somewhere not the cabin, preferably without fishing/cabin but having some downtime

( Fishing Is....Pt2 )

stargate, slash, ficathon

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captainlogic October 13 2009, 11:05:37 UTC

Is good thing, yes?? :) :)

discodiva76 October 13 2009, 14:59:24 UTC

*is also a big pile of gooey mess*......our boyz so deserve a vacay like this....*whispers*...thank you for such a wonderful scenario and description....I felt like I was watching it right there!...

Deeds xx

captainlogic October 15 2009, 21:53:35 UTC

Thanks, I reread it and sorta worried that I got a little ahem *graphic* there at the end, kind of weird how you can forget what you've written when your looking over it for mistakes rather than actually reading it if that makes sense!
Iknow a vacay like this would NEVER be allowed but yeah, its fiction right? :)

lilyleia78 October 13 2009, 20:27:46 UTC

ahem, is it hot in here? :)

captainlogic October 15 2009, 21:54:25 UTC

Hmmmmm ,maybe if its hot enough, theyll have to take off their shirts???? ;)
Happy to provide the hot!

starglyph October 14 2009, 05:22:14 UTC

I really enjoyed this, but I gotta say the sex was beautifully detailed without going overboard. The sensations and emotions were as wonderfully hot as they were lovingly shared between them. Oh yeah. :)

captainlogic October 15 2009, 21:56:08 UTC

When i was reading over it, i was kinda shocked with myself and sooo worried it was OTT in a massive way and overly graphic in a not sexy sort of way so Im so relieved the consensus seems to be hot rather than overboard so youve no idea how much your comment means! thanks for taking the time to review

paianfic October 14 2009, 22:05:57 UTC

Whoo-EEE is that hot. Sex in the gate! That whole scene is just fabulous. Vacation sex and make-up sex and gate sex ftw!

“Why we always sent teams out one by one to their designated planet. Surely we could have just gotten all the teams together in the gate room and then sent them all in one go to a friendly or deserted planet and then they could have gated off to their respective planets from there. Cost way less surely? The gate at the start of a wormhole pays the electricity bill…”

What a great point and a great idea!

I like that they switch trains at Edora -- it's like a balm on the 'Shades of Grey' wound, using the same place for a similar but so much nicer purpose.

Lovely fic, very glad you wrote. :-)

captainlogic October 15 2009, 21:58:44 UTC

I've always wanted to try and 'heal' that wound, being boys they were very flippant and glib about it but I maintain it would have hurt, even Daniels little remark at the end would have smarted, I think Jack feels things much more deeply than hed ever reveal.
I've always wondered if price and cost was alwyas such an issue why if it was canon that the utgoing gate maintained the wormhole that all teams couldnt be dispatcehd in one go than all this one at a time crap but hey ho, i use fanfic to vent!
THanks for hte lovely review and for taking the time to leave it