Chapter 3: In which Anne enters into a castle and a bargain

[captainladyace]

Title: Alfred's Moving Castle
Genre: Fantasy/ Crossover
Pairings: USxfem!UK
Rating/Warnings: G, human names are used exclusively, genderbending
Summary: Based off the book version of Howl's Moving Castle by Diana Wynn Jones. Everything belongs to their respective owners. There are some odd familial relationships in here, but please just go with them

Comments

[xolavander]

Is.. is that Gilbert? The fire demon? Oh, wow. Things are really getting interesting! I can not wait for the next part!

[kasumicc]

I don't think that trusting Gilbert's the best of ideas |D And I like the idea of Matthew being Alfred's apprentice! Really enjoyable chapter :)

Pssst, you wrote Sophie instead of Anne in a sentence xD

[captainladyace]

Thanks for the approval! Gah no matter how much I look I can't find it... hey would you be willing to beta for me? My old one unfortunately can't do it anymore... and I'm in desperate need... Thanks either way!

[kasumicc]

I'm sorry, but I don't take beta reading jobs >.< Catching such typos is one thing, but I'm not a native English speaker so catching general typos and grammar mistakes is not my thing...

[roseink]

Congratulations on your acceptance! I hope you are happy there, and that you make good friends and better memories. If you dont mind me asking, what college is it?

(Oh, and great chapter by the way. I've never read the book, but I feel like you're writing very close to the author's style. I also love that Gilbert is Calcifer.)

[captainladyace]

Sorry for the late reply, too many apps to focus too much on this! I got into Oregon State, Drexel, and Kettering, with some $$ so I'm pleased!

Thanks a ton, I need to do more edits and then hopefully more of this!