The Enemy of My Enemy (III)

Aug 06, 2012 16:16

Title:  The Enemy of My Enemy (III)
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gaslight, drabble

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sweet_chi August 6 2012, 22:25:18 UTC
Glad we got some closure for the Watson/Clay drama. Nicely done!

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capt_facepalm August 10 2012, 14:38:28 UTC
Is it the end, or a beginning!
Thanks!

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azuhra August 7 2012, 00:01:57 UTC
One of those few times when Watson is aware of something before Holmes. Or at least he considered it and found the humor in it before his friend did. Excellent wrap-up to the tale, it amazing really that you fit so much story into 300 words. Xhallenge well met!

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capt_facepalm August 10 2012, 14:48:15 UTC
Thanks!
This is one of those times when Watson has a different awareness of a situation than Holmes does. In this case, Watson has spent at least a week in the company of John Clay. I characterise Watson as having the ability to understand people, whereas Holmes's knowledge is more superficial.
As to the humour: the drabble is followed up by a round of laughter by both Holmes, with the idea that Clay will escape, and Watson, who appreciates that Holmes will do nothing to prevent Clay's escape.

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methylviolet10b August 7 2012, 15:48:46 UTC
LOL! This reminds me of the wonderful line from the Br'er Rabbit stories: 'Please don't throw me into that there briar patch, Br'er Fox...' ;-)

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capt_facepalm August 10 2012, 14:40:06 UTC
It kind of does, doesn't it!
Thanks for following it as it developed!

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gardnerhill August 10 2012, 03:25:04 UTC
Heh heh heh. Just like the Penguin. (Batman: "Aren't you sorry you're going back to prison?" Penguin: "Hmph! Hardly! There's at least twenty-five escape methods I haven't tried yet!")

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capt_facepalm August 10 2012, 14:51:26 UTC
It's just so!
Clay would make an interesting foil for Holmes in future stories. Especially if Watson kept coming up with reasons why he was unavailable to help.

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