Test pages

[gcat101]

Some thing I've wanted to work on for a while so I penciled up the first two pages to see what you guys thought. I'll ink them tomorrow and start work on the rest of the pages if you think it's interesting.

Comments

[zsomeone]

Well that's extremely twisted and I'm definitely intrigued.

I've never done comics though, so I'm afraid I can't be helpful there. I do like the (don't know what it's called) uneven sizing of the panels though.

My only opinion art-wise... I understand the t-shirt, but I had to check the tags to see for sure who he was. To me, Bullets is always in an open button up shirt.

[gcat101]

Oh good I'm glad you're interested, :)

Ah you don't need expertise just a sharp eye is cool enough. Really gosh I was worried about the panels it's good to know some one likes them.

Ahh, I was worried about resemblance Bullets is a hard one to capture aged wise but I'll try to get some more reference to get the future pages better. I'm sure he'd love a button up shirt to open but I'm not sure he would be allowed one here, I might look it up but I think care homes and mental health hospitals don't allow endangering items, if any one knows other wise please do say.

[zsomeone]

Ah, I didn't realize the setting, thought he was at home. Yeah they had plain neck stuff when they were in the hospital.

You did his profile very well. I'm not a huge SNB person like you, so he's not as burned into my brain.

[gcat101]

Ah it's not too obvious in the pencils but I put some hints here and there but it will be revealed a lot more in the next pages, hopefully :)

Ah thank you! Hahaha seems like I am a SNB person aren't I but thank you again for the comments, I am going to try to colour the pages as I think it will probably look much better if I do. ;)