Comments | capslokdethklok: Angry Charles is mean!

corvidmoon in capslokdethklok

Angry Charles is mean!

Jan 20, 2011 18:53

The boys were hanging out in the woods that surrounded Mordhaus. Apparently, Nathan had decided to teach the others how to hunt. The only one who seemed to be enjoying himself, other than Nathan, was Murderface. Pickles was too high to grasp what was going on, or even realize he was outside. Toki was mortified he was expected to shoot ( Read more... )

fic:-charles, fic-corvidmoon, fic:-nathan, !-intro post, fic:-dethklok

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pandaklok January 21 2011, 00:59:39 UTC

It's fine now! I was in the middle of leaving a "Psst the cut didn't work comment" while you were editing.

But I liked this story, you almost had me thinking it's real...because come on, we all know that one day poor Charlie is just gonna snap like a twig.

corvidmoon January 21 2011, 01:15:37 UTC

Yeah I had trouble getting the cut to work, but I got it figured it out.

This story jumped into my head at work a month or so ago and it didn't go away so I actually wrote it down

Glad you liked it!

zsomeone January 21 2011, 01:41:05 UTC

Well I was thinking that wow, this was an extremly brutal first fic. Most people take them out to dinner first before executing them all.

But then it was only paintballs! Good job.

corvidmoon January 21 2011, 01:59:43 UTC

Glad you liked it. I was hoping to make people go OMG at first and then be relieved at the end.

nawazarrio January 21 2011, 01:41:43 UTC

Yay Charles! You deserved it.

I wonder if he's ever read 'The Most Dangerous Game'? XD

corvidmoon January 21 2011, 02:02:39 UTC

I'm sure he has. Goodness knows I had to write a 10 page paper on it when I was a freshman in college. This story wasn't based on it but when I was re-reading it after I wrote it I thought of that story.

nawazarrio January 21 2011, 02:21:54 UTC

Right. I realize that this story is your own creation, but it's an enjoyable parallel. :3

october_horizon January 22 2011, 06:50:06 UTC

Ahaha, that was the first thing I thought of! xD
A few months ago at the beginning of my first year in high school, we read "The Most Dangerous Game" and did a project on it (we also did "The Miracle Worker" and "Monster").

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nugatorytm January 21 2011, 01:51:20 UTC

From what I understand, paintballs sting quite a bit. Poor Murderface is gonna feel that crotch shot for quite some time.

corvidmoon January 21 2011, 02:03:54 UTC

That is my understanding as well. But, who better for Charles to take a crotch shot at? ;)

turnip_girl January 21 2011, 02:12:05 UTC

LMAO Serves 'em all right.

(omg London gig yes plz. :3)

corvidmoon January 21 2011, 04:35:51 UTC

You know they just ask for this.