YES, THAT'S TRUE, AND RAYN IS ALSO A DIFFERENT KIND OF VILLAINOUS ARCHETYPE: SHE'S NOT MEANT TO PROVOKE VISCERAL DISGUST LIKE KREW, SO IT'S MUCH LESS PROBLEMATIC.
OF COURSE, KREW COULD HAVE GIVEN UP ON HIS HEALTH BECAUSE HE KNOWS HE'S SCREWED SOONER OR LATER ANYWAY. I ALSO WONDER IF-- DEPENDING ON WHAT KIND OF PROBLEMS HAVEN'S FOOD SUPPLY HAS-- KREW MIGHT BE EXPERIENCING SOMETHING AKIN TO RABBIT STARVATION. MALNOURISHED PEOPLE GETTING OBESE IS A DOCUMENTED PHENOMENON, AND IT CAN SKIP GENERATIONS, TOO. TWO PEOPLE EAT THE SAME TERRIBLE DIET AND ONE GETS FAT WHILE THE OTHER GETS THIN.
I HIGHLY DOUBT THEY DRINK THE WATER FROM THE PORT. LOOK AT HOW OFTEN IT RAINS IN-GAME, AND CONSIDER ALSO THAT THEY HAVE AN ENTIRE SYSTEM OF PLUMBING SET UP. THE PORT IS PROBABLY WHERE SEWAGE GOES.
I WONDER WHETHER REVERSE OSMOSIS WOULD REMOVE DARK ECO.
OFFICIAL NOTE: I ACTUALLY SPECIFIED TWO PER PERSON PER CHARACTER-- THAT IS, THE THEORETICAL MAXIMUM FOR ONE ENTRANT WOULD BE TWO DIFFERENT REDESIGNS EACH OF EVERY SINGLE FEMALE CHARACTER, WHICH IS FOURTEEN ENTRIES.
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I LIKE THIS VERSION OF ASHELIN. I'M NOT TOTALLY CONVINCED THAT CHEST ARMOR WOULD WORK, BUT I'M NOT TOTALLY CONVINCED THE CANON DESIGN WOULD WORK.
IF THE BLACK CLOTH IS MEANT TO BE RIGHT UP AGAINST HER SKIN, THEN SHE APPEARS TO BE MUCH MORE MUSCULAR THAN SHE IS IN THE GAMES. IF THE BLACK CLOTH IS MEANT TO BE PADDED, THEN PERHAPS NOT SO MUCH.
REALLY, SHE SHOULD PROBABLY HAVE BEEN WEARING THIS (IN RED) WHEN SHE WAS AT THE PUMPING STATION. MAYBE SHE TOOK IT OFF TO CLIMB BETTER OR AVOID OVERHEATING, BUT IT'S PROBABLY WHAT SHE SHOULD HAVE ARRIVED IN.
WHAT YOU MENTION IN THE DESCRIPTION ABOUT HER CUP SIZE IS ALSO INTERESTING. IT'S INVISIBLE IN THE PICTURE, OF COURSE, BUT IT BRINGS UP INTERESTING POINTS ABOUT WHAT WE MEAN WHEN WE TALK ABOUT "REALISTIC" PROPORTIONS. DO WE MEAN POSSIBLE PROPORTIONS? OR DO WE MEAN
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I CAN'T SEE HOW SHE'S SUPPOSED TO GET IT ON AND OFF, AND, LIKE CANON, IT LOOKS LIKE THE ARMOR ITSELF IS RIGHT UP AGAINST HER SKIN AROUND HER ARMS AND TORSO, SO ALL THE FORCE FROM A BLOW WILL BE CONCENTRATED RIGHT IN THOSE UNPADDED AREAS. THIS IS MORE OF A COMPLAINT ABOUT THE KRIMZON GUARD DESIGN IN CANON THAN IT IS ABOUT YOUR DRAWING, ALTHOUGH YOU DON'T TEND TO REALLY NOTICE IT IN CANON WHEN THE KG ARE ATTACKING.
DEPENDING ON WHETHER THEIR WORLD HAS SEXISM, FORMALWEAR FOR ASHELIN MIGHT NOT BE ABSURDLY IMPRACTICAL. MAYBE I COULD BASE IT ON A DRESS UNIFORM FROM SOME REAL-LIFE ARMY.
AS MUCH AS I REGRET THE LACK OF OTHER PEOPLE'S ENTRIES, I'M THRILLED TO SEE YOURS. I'M PRETTY AMBIVALENT ABOUT THIS KEIRA; WHY THE JACKET? WHY SUCH AN EVEN TAN? I LIKE THAT IT'S READILY APPARENT THE EFFECT KEIRA'S WORK HAS ON HER BODY HERE, BUT I ALWAYS THOUGHT THAT IT WAS NICE THAT HER PRESENTATION WAS GENERALLY VERY FEMININE AND I DON'T FEEL LIKE IT COMES THROUGH AS CLEARLY HERE AS IN CANON. THAT AND THE JACKET SEEMS TO REALLY TONE DOWN HER GENERALLY BRIGHT AND EYE-CATCHING AESTHETIC. WAS THAT INTENTIONAL?
THERE NOT BEING ANYONE ELSE, UM... PROVISIONAL CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING FIRST, SECOND AND THIRD PLACE! IF NO ONE ELSE SUBMITS ANYTHING, YOU WIN ALL THREE DRABBLE PROMPTS AUTOMATICALLY.
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OF COURSE, KREW COULD HAVE GIVEN UP ON HIS HEALTH BECAUSE HE KNOWS HE'S SCREWED SOONER OR LATER ANYWAY. I ALSO WONDER IF-- DEPENDING ON WHAT KIND OF PROBLEMS HAVEN'S FOOD SUPPLY HAS-- KREW MIGHT BE EXPERIENCING SOMETHING AKIN TO RABBIT STARVATION. MALNOURISHED PEOPLE GETTING OBESE IS A DOCUMENTED PHENOMENON, AND IT CAN SKIP GENERATIONS, TOO. TWO PEOPLE EAT THE SAME TERRIBLE DIET AND ONE GETS FAT WHILE THE OTHER GETS THIN.
I HIGHLY DOUBT THEY DRINK THE WATER FROM THE PORT. LOOK AT HOW OFTEN IT RAINS IN-GAME, AND CONSIDER ALSO THAT THEY HAVE AN ENTIRE SYSTEM OF PLUMBING SET UP. THE PORT IS PROBABLY WHERE SEWAGE GOES.
I WONDER WHETHER REVERSE OSMOSIS WOULD REMOVE DARK ECO.
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I LIKE THIS VERSION OF ASHELIN. I'M NOT TOTALLY CONVINCED THAT CHEST ARMOR WOULD WORK, BUT I'M NOT TOTALLY CONVINCED THE CANON DESIGN WOULD WORK.
IF THE BLACK CLOTH IS MEANT TO BE RIGHT UP AGAINST HER SKIN, THEN SHE APPEARS TO BE MUCH MORE MUSCULAR THAN SHE IS IN THE GAMES. IF THE BLACK CLOTH IS MEANT TO BE PADDED, THEN PERHAPS NOT SO MUCH.
REALLY, SHE SHOULD PROBABLY HAVE BEEN WEARING THIS (IN RED) WHEN SHE WAS AT THE PUMPING STATION. MAYBE SHE TOOK IT OFF TO CLIMB BETTER OR AVOID OVERHEATING, BUT IT'S PROBABLY WHAT SHE SHOULD HAVE ARRIVED IN.
WHAT YOU MENTION IN THE DESCRIPTION ABOUT HER CUP SIZE IS ALSO INTERESTING. IT'S INVISIBLE IN THE PICTURE, OF COURSE, BUT IT BRINGS UP INTERESTING POINTS ABOUT WHAT WE MEAN WHEN WE TALK ABOUT "REALISTIC" PROPORTIONS. DO WE MEAN POSSIBLE PROPORTIONS? OR DO WE MEAN ( ... )
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DEPENDING ON WHETHER THEIR WORLD HAS SEXISM, FORMALWEAR FOR ASHELIN MIGHT NOT BE ABSURDLY IMPRACTICAL. MAYBE I COULD BASE IT ON A DRESS UNIFORM FROM SOME REAL-LIFE ARMY.
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THERE NOT BEING ANYONE ELSE, UM... PROVISIONAL CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING FIRST, SECOND AND THIRD PLACE! IF NO ONE ELSE SUBMITS ANYTHING, YOU WIN ALL THREE DRABBLE PROMPTS AUTOMATICALLY.
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