TORN & THE KG...

Feb 02, 2011 21:40

SO, I'M IN THE MIDDLE OF WRITING THIS TORN-CENTRIC ONE SHOT WHEN MY MEMORY OF JAK II BECAME FUZZY (I'M OLD MAN) AND I DIDN'T WANT TO TRUST WIKIA WITH ANY QUESTIONS. AND SO, I'VE COME TO THE ONLY PLACE THAT I KNOW WOULD BE A RELIABLE SOURCE!

TORN & JAK II... )

vrrrrrrrrrrrrrroom, serious business

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otana February 3 2011, 02:56:48 UTC
YOUR LOWERCASE IS SHOWING :|

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abyss_torynn February 3 2011, 02:58:15 UTC
D: GAH! TOTALLY FORGOT. WILL FIX THAT AS SOON AS I FIGURE OUT HOW....

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abyss_torynn February 3 2011, 03:02:29 UTC
OR I'LL JUST DELETE. THAT WORKS.
AS FOR WHAT I JUST DELETED:

I DON'T THINK IT WAS EVER MENTIONED SPECIFICALLY WHAT HIS RANK WAS...BUT I'VE READ TOO MUCH FANFICTION TO REMEMBER ACCURATELY. I WILL, HOWEVER BE TRYING TO REPLAY AS MUCH OF THE GAMES AS POSSIBLE THIS WEEKEND WHEN I CAN RETURN TO MY LOVELY PLAYSTATION. I CAN KEEP AN EYE OUT FOR YOU IF YOU LIKE.

THE KEIRA THING IS THIS MASSIVE FLAMING PLOT HOLE THAT'S NEVER EVEN BEEN HINTED AT, SO WHO KNOWS. YOUR IDEA ABOUT KREW SOUNDS REASONABLE THOUGH....

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otana February 3 2011, 03:06:31 UTC
GOD THAT WIKI IS SHIT

TORN WAS A COMMANDER, IIRC. I WOULD HAVE TO DIG THROUGH CUTSCENES WHERE IT SPECIFICALLY SAID AS MUCH THOUGH. IF I'M RIGHT, CAPTAIN IS A STEP DOWN FROM COMMANDER, SO HE WAS PROBABLY A CAPTAIN AT SOME POINT, BUT THAT'S KINDA BESIDE THE POINT

I SUSPECT KEIRA WORKED HER WAY UP? I MEAN SHE HAD TWO DAMN YEARS TO DO IT IN, AND WE KNOW SHE'S GOOD BECAUSE SHE SINGLE-HANDEDLY INVENTED THE ZOOMER

BUT YOU'RE GETTING INTO FANON TERRITORY THERE ANYWAY, SO I THINK IT'S TOTALLY FEASIBLE TO RUN WITH WHATEVER YOU LIKE. I'D NOT BE SO SURE ABOUT THE KREW THING THOUGH; KEIRA ISN'T LIKE JAK, SHE ABSOLUTELY DESPISES THE MAN AND ANYTHING TO DO WITH HIM, I CAN'T SEE HER TOLERATING HIM FOR EVEN A SECOND

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renjiluvah February 3 2011, 03:39:53 UTC
LMFAO SO I HEAR ABOUT WIKIA. ;-) YEAH, I WAS UNDER THE IMPRESSION THAT HE WAS A COMMANDER TOO. BUT DAMN WIKIA MADE ME SECOND GUESS MYSELF WHEN IT SAID CAPTAIN ON ANOTHER PAGE, AS WELL AS SAYING CAPTAIN OUTRANKED COMMANDER. HUH? WE KNOW HE'S A COMMANDER NOW, I WAS JUST CURIOUS ABOUT BACK THEN.

WORKING HER WAY UP DOES SOUND REALISTIC. AND SHE DID INVENT THE FIRST ZOOMER. I'LL SEE WHAT MY OWN FANON CAN COME UP WITH. HOPEFULLY WHATEVER I WRITE SEEMS REASONABLY BELIEVABLE HAHA. AND YOU KNOW WHAT, I AGREE. I REMEMBER HOW DISGUSTED SHE WAS WHEN SHE FOUND OUT ABOUT JAK WORKING FOR KREW BUT I STILL CAN'T HELP FEELING LIKE SOMETHING MUST'VE HAPPENED FOR HER TO FEEL THAT WAY OR ELSE HE'D JUST BE SOME MOB GUY SHE DIDN'T REALLY CARE ABOUT. I WONDER...

ANYWAY, THANKS FOR THE INFO. :D

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tehsongsong February 3 2011, 03:48:11 UTC
HOLY FUCK FINALLY I FIND IT


... )

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abyss_torynn February 3 2011, 03:55:30 UTC
HOORAY!

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varethane February 3 2011, 03:15:46 UTC
RE: THE KEIRA THING, I DID READ THIS INTERESTING FANFICTION ONCE BY KRIN....

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renjiluvah February 3 2011, 03:40:25 UTC
OOH! THANKS FOR THE LINK. I'VE STARTED READING IT NOW. WILL LEAVE A REVIEW EVENTUALLY. THANKS. :D

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tehsongsong February 3 2011, 03:49:32 UTC
FUCK YES MECHANIC GIRL <3 OH MAN, BEST KEIRA FIC EVER.

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renjiluvah February 3 2011, 14:58:13 UTC
HOLY CRAP! I READ IT! AND IT WAS AWESOME! LEFT 'EM A GUSHING REVIEW. THANKS FOR THE READ MAN. SOOOOO DID NOT EXPECT THE PLOT TWIST TOWARDS THE END. AND I LOVE HOW HE/SHE WROTE KEIRA'S NERD TALK HAHA.

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skiota February 3 2011, 03:18:28 UTC
I THINK IT MENTIONED HIM BEING A COMMANDER AT SOME POINT, BUT I COULD BE RECALLING ASHELIN CALLING HIM THAT AT THE END OF JAK 2 RIGHT BEFORE THE BIG PARTY. I THINK A LOT OF TORN'S BACK STORY IS LARGELY FANNON.

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renjiluvah February 3 2011, 03:41:46 UTC
YEAH, SHE DOES CALL HIM THAT. BUT IT'S BECAUSE SHE MAKES HIM COMMANDER NOW THAT SHE'S THE GOVERNESS OF HAVEN AT THE END OF THE GAME. SO I'M STILL UNCLEAR ABOUT WHAT HE COULD'VE BEEN BEFORE THE UNDERGROUND, BUT YOU'RE RIGHT, FANON TERRITORY. GUESS I SHOULD SEE WHAT I CAN COME UP WITH. THANKS. :D

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abyss_torynn February 3 2011, 03:27:23 UTC
I TOTALLY APPROVE. NOT THAT MY APPROVAL COUNTS FOR ANYTHING.

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renjiluvah February 3 2011, 03:47:25 UTC
OH GOOD. NOT FOND OF TAR AND FEATHERS HAHA. THERE'S CRAZY PEOPLE OUT THERE MAN. I ONCE READ THIS AWESOME FIC AND SOMEONE LEFT A GOD AWFUL REVIEW JUST BECAUSE OF THE PAIRING AND WAS TOTALLY NASTY ABOUT IT DESPITE THAT THE WRITING AND PLOT ITSELF WAS WONDERFUL. I'D HATE TO BE THAT AUTHOR FACING ONE OF THOSE CRAZIES ( ... )

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