Facing The Consequences

[capricorn86]

Title: Facing The Consequences
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: John Winchester (16), John`s father, Mary Winchester/Campbell, (16) Deanna Campbell (Mary`s mother) Mentions of Samuel Campbell (Mary`s father)
Disclaimer: I own nothing. No profit is being made.
Warning: Very graphic sexual content! Also contains spanking (belt in John`s part, hand and

Comments

[brassband777]

It really amused me that John told the truth and Mary lied. Ha Ha. It makes perfect sense that Mary having been brought up a hunter would be able to pull off untruths.
Very realistic that Deanna lacks the physical strength to spank a teenager properly using just her hand. Loved viewing Mary's thoughts during the spanking :)
'the weapon of the mighty Hairbrush' Ha ha ha...I bet Mary wishes that haibrush didn't exist!
It was really sweet how both Mary and John though each other were worth it at.
Enjoyed the first person narrative in both and ADORED both points of view :D

[capricorn86]

I kept thinking of Dean when I wrote this (I often think of him when writing Teen!Mary, I think they share certain similarities) and how Dean has been taught to lie. I think Samuel has done the same with Mary.
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed the first person narrative. I don`t usually write in first person, as I prefer the third person view, but for the teen!john/mary stories I prefer to keep it in first-person.. don`t know why. :P

[winchesterlove2]

this was a great pov as well. i love how uncertain they both were. I would never do something like that because 1. i believe in abstinence and saving yourself for marriage (but that is besides the point)

and 2. my schools like theirs would call home if you were absent. Even if you missed one class period. If it wasn't excused you got a call home.

I've only missed classes in college lol

[capricorn86]

Thank you, glad you liked both POV.
I often missed classes in High School, hehe. But my school didn`t notify your parents.. :D

:D

[hlscruggs]

This brings back painful memories of my youth....

For you not being used to writing this sort of material you've done a great job expressing how John and Mary both felt throughout their first time.

I like how Mary thinks she's getting away with a typical Mom spanking and then.... WHAP the brush makes it's appearance.

Again, you took a little thought and turned it into two wonderful fics. I cannot find the words to express how pleased I with how this turned out.

Heather

Re: :D

[capricorn86]

Thank you. :)
You`ve made me very happy with your lovely feedback, I`m so glad you liked what I did with your prompt.

loved it

[ext_1517452]

thank you it was a good story thanks