The Price Of Disobedience (Teen!Chesters)

[capricorn86]

Title: The Price Of Disobedience
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: John, Dean (19), Sam (15)
Summary: John has to punish the boys for disobeying orders during a hunt
Warning: Contains spankings of teenagers (belt)
Author`s Note: Uhm… enjoy. Let me know what you think.

The 67 Chevy Impala came to a halt in front of a large, abandoned house. It was old

Comments

[chriscross1974]

I really like it. Your teenc stories are my favorites one. I was glad that the boys didn`t apologized like they always do. They thought is the right thing do ,to go to help John, and they did it. And of course John, stubborn and proud hunter and scared father, react the way he thought was the best. Oh, John`s tears in the end were great!:)

[capricorn86]

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it. :)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[brassband777]

And you say I'm good at portraying the relationship between Dean and Sam? Well here you certainly surpassed me! The moments between Sam and Dean here made my heart melt. Loved Sam correcting Dean and saying it's 'conjoined twins'. I also really liked that Dean refused to apologise and that John didn't force him to, acknowledging that Dean and Sam wouldn't have done anything else given the circumstances. Fantastic :D

[capricorn86]

Haha! :D You are, though. Seriously. <3

Thank you very much!

[lady_m_319]

Wow! John's emotions. Dean's emotions. Sammy's emotions. You could feel all their pain. Loved Dean always protecting Sammy, even going against John. John does what he thinks is best for his boys. Nice ending.

[capricorn86]

Thank you very much. :) Glad all their emotions came through the way I intended.

[capricorn86]

Thanks, that means a lot! :D