Joyride III

[capricorn86]

Title: Joyride III
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: Dean, Ben (13) Alice (6)
Summary: Ben steals the key to the Impala and tries to drive it
Disclaimer: Dean Winchester and Ben Braeden do not belong to me. This is a non-profit fanfiction.
Warning: Contains spanking of a minor by a parent
Author`s Note: Prompt by always_angel. Thank you, hope you

Comments

[brassband777]

Ben definitely deserved that! Thinking of going for a joyride in the first place, never mind taking a 6-year-old along, indeed! A lovely story as always :)

[capricorn86]

I know! Not a very smart move, Ben.. *shakes head*

Thank you! :D

[erotillectual]

I see a sequel here...Alice accidentally tells, and Ben gets it from Sam!

[capricorn86]

....hmm
That`s a pretty neat idea. :) It would certainly be interesting to write a story where Sam is the one spanking Ben, and not Dean. Thanks! :D

I couldn`t resist!

[capricorn86]

I couldn`t resist this idea, so I wrote a second part/sequel to the story, it`s here: http://capricorn86.livejournal.com/13807.html

Thanks a lot for the suggestion! :D

[jtp4me]

I'd say Ben got what he deserved with this one. Things could have gone really bad if Ben had managed to make it out of the garage with the Impala.

[capricorn86]

Very true. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[lady_m_319]

Loved it! Alice fit very nicely into the story and was very cute. Best line: sitting in the driver`s seat and having “awoken” the Impala. We always think of the Impala as a third character to the boys so this line was great. Ben deserved what Dean dished out. Loved that Dean didn't want to tell Sam because he wouldn't let him watch Alice again. The ending brought elicited a *grin*. Nicely done.

P.S. Hope London was fun. (and I'm behind in all my reading and commenting. It's no means a slight towards your other posted fics.)

[capricorn86]

Thank you so much! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

Yes, London was great! And no worries, I look forward to reading your comments on my other fics, but please take your time. :D

[winchesterlove2]

what a fantastic story! just a little nitpick though...isn't the Impala automatic transmission? There would be no clutch because there's a bench seat so no gear shift...

glad you were nagged by this plot bunny :)

[capricorn86]

Thank you!

ehh.. *awkward silence* I honestly don`t know. I`m not sure I even understand what you mean, lol. I know nothing about cars. *feels dumb*

[winchesterlove2]

lol just nod and say yes XD! In cars there are 2 different types of transmission (basically ways to get your engine running). Automatic (which has a computer system built in so you don't worry about changing gears you just press the gas pedal)

and Manual (which has a gearshift down in the console between driver and passenger and contains a clutch pedal which has to pushed to start the car as well as when you are changing gears.

We never see Dean reach down to shift gears and shots of the Impala show the full bench seat with no gear shift so I'm gonna guess it's an automatic transmission with just 2 pedals: Gas & Brake

I don't know much about cars either. I just know from years of having both automatic & manual transmission cars in my family. :)

[capricorn86]

Ah, OK I see. :) Thanks for explaining that to me, I honestly didn`t consider that when writing this.