Harry Potter and the Forgotten Heirs Chapter Five

[capriciouspc]

Author’s Notes: Okay, I’ll be honest with you. I didn’t really take the time to proofread this chapter. It’s long, it was difficult to write, and I’m sick of looking at it. I’ll probably go back and fix all the glaring errors later, if there are any. (I’m pretty certain there are, though.) I just want to dump this chapter on your doorstep and keep

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[vultrix]

Re: end note.... One, I LOVED Vengful Duo ::cackles:: Thats probably the best seen I've ever read in fiction, of the Dursleys getting whats coming to them

[capriciouspc]

Heh. I had so many fun things I wanted to do with the Dursleys, and I had to force myself to lighten up so Shinigami!Duo wouldn't scare the piss out of Harry's "character." ^_^; It wasn't only because they treat Harry like dirt; I have to admit, I had personal reasons as to why I'm disgusted with the Dursley family. Bad parenting is one of my biggest pet peeves, and no one is more guilty of this than the Dursleys. DUDLEY is clearly a product of that, after all.

Gee, I wonder what would happen in the seventh book if Vernon actually took a swing at Harry. *smirks* Kid's gotten a bigger pair on him now. I imagine he'd retaliate by doing something nasty to him via magic before giving them all the figurative bird before leaving without a second glance. *sighs* Ah, to dream...

Oh, God. *groans* When my best friend since kindergarten got engaged, they were overly sappy and all like "I love you" "No, I love you more!" It drove me absolutely bananas. When they started trying to play Matchmaker me and some guy I could barely tolerate is the

[cero_ate]

I love this whole series and could probably babble for several comments on the awesomenss of it. Scarily, everyone is pretty true to themselves. Some fics I read, Draco suddenly loves muggles because he's dating Harry and that's just wrong. I was really excited when I saw you got a livejournal. Most of my internet time is through my cellphone, and while it's great for most things, only some of the fanfiction.net pages show up, and only the first chapter of them. Luckily livejournal works just fine. Anyway, love haircut, and the sundae and them doing it to Duo, and Duo using latex gloves for his bra-stuffing. The story is so incredibly good I'm on edge waiting for updates. Post another chapter as soon as you can.

[capriciouspc]

Aw, jeez. *sheepishly grins while kicking at the floor modestly* You make me blush

[virtual_famine]

I've been loving your story and I don't have any particular complaints about it to bring up, but I have to admit to being the kind of person who just can't help but poke trouble/cause annoyance where I can (unfortunately in a way that causes noone but myself amusement.. well, unfortunately for everyone else). And that really just manifests itself as me being extremely particular with small and often trivial technicalities (for example, one's choice of wording

[virtual_famine]

So here's the rest of it. Lucky you, hmm? And please forgive me for being an idiot. I really am tired. I don't think I'm quite this bad all the time, though some may beg to differ

Shucks...

[capriciouspc]

Dude. I've BEEN there. ^_^ Running purely on caffeine and grit, so far toeing the breaking point of the stream of consciousness thing... No need to apologize. It's understandable. ^_

[princesssiara]

So, I wandered over here from ff.net, and wanted to specifically comment on this chapter.
Even though it probably isn't possible to play floccinaucinihilipilification on Scrabble, that word has become my new favourite word. I spent a while learning how to say it, and I can spell it too! So now, being all weird the way I am, I whip it out during casual conversation, just to see people's mental whiplash. I find it incredibly amusing. Then I have to explain it, and what it means.

So I just wanted to say thank you so much for giving me another way to have my petty amusments along with an incredibly great fic!