HMD meme!

[capn_freakshow]

It's been almost a year since we had one, so it's now time for

MICROCOSM RP'S HMD MEME

Anonymous commenting is ON. IP logging is OFF. Post here with your character's name and journal name and people will come and give you constructive criticism. Emphasis on the 'constructive' part there, guys - if we see people being negative without leaving

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[kabukimono]

Maeda Keiji -- lifebeatson

Zhang Xing Cai -- skeweredess

Gracia -- holybloomers

Okuni -- raging_sun

Nene -- mommydeadliest

[scruffyfeathers]

I don't know any of your canons yet, but I love playing with you, so. PLAY WITH ME MOAR :| :| :| Daddy Tibarn misses his Gracia. ♥

[holybloomers]

Daddy Tibarn <3

[blahblahhonor]

I just want to say, thank you for being so welcoming and just easy to talk to... not that I'm that talkative.

As for your characters, their voices are all good, though I'd like to see Nene more active. I know that you dropped her last time because you felt you couldn't play her well with out Hideyoshi, but honestly, that really shouldn't be a barrier. She thinks she's everyone's mommmy after all and aside from Mitsunari, they are many, many people here for her to Mom all over.

[ridethetiger]

Ggio Vega - rapeofthetiger

He also has a permanent crit post here. Any and all crit welcome!

[saketiems]

I'm afraid I don't know Ggio very well as a character, as I never followed his sections closely. The main query I have is to why an Arrancar so readily accepted a 'mortal' family over his loyalties to Aizen.

It's possible I missed the threads where that development happened, and I'm just curious.

[ridethetiger]

It's cool, he was pretty much canon fodder as he was just an arrogant brat as far as we saw

[sacredremains]

Don't know his canon well and I've only played with him once but he never fails to crack me. XD S-sorry not much of a crit but keep it up! Plus, mun = win.

[handmedownsir]

Joker - handmedownsir

He's really new, and I hope I'm not failing as badly at him as I sometimes think I may be. Any concrit at all would be highly appreciated.

[hahimafiaboy]

This is not constructive AT ALL hurrr b-but he's really really cute. I love stalking him and playing with him already, aaa. *o*b

SOMEDAY I WILL GET FURTHER IN HIS CANON AND HAVE SOMETHING USEFUL TO SAY :(b

[handmedownsir]

I'm glad you think he's cute, and that you like him! I aim to please~

And yes, you should read it =3 It's so so good.

[sting_to_death]

Soi Fong ||| sting_to_death

Kuna Mashiro ||| bug_bug_bug

Both have anon enabled posts because I'm always looking for concrit and trying to improve, so let it all out~♥

[saketiems]

sting_to_death Perfect. You capture her slightly unsure and emotional side, while maintaining her poker face. She's a joy to stalk interact with~

bug_bug_bug Mashiro is really fun to thread with, so zany and mad. The only point I would make is, with all the Espada and traitors around, not to forget her serious side. I realise it shows through very rarely, but that's the only crit I have.

[sting_to_death]

Rofl what's up with Soi and all the stalking my god XD (ALSO THANKS AKSJDSKSK ♥♥♥)

I was just thinking about it, tbh. It's hard to bring out a serious side when she's all "lololol let's kick this arrancar's asses 8D" when the Vaizards finally arrive on the battlefield- but yes, she does have a serious side. I think it showed a bit when she had to reset her chip with Kensei, and generally in his interactions with him-- what I'm trying to show is that her feelings for Kensei are much deeper than one would tell at first glance.

Tl;dr: yes I agree I should show more of her serious sides when it comes her enemies, not only Kensei~! ♥

[ridethetiger]

If I may interfere - for helping bring out Mashiro's serious side, perhaps you may want to consider how because she's a Vizard she's more in touch with her Hollow, so that has an effect on her?

Also, l-loev the Soibeans, and I so appreciate just how you're handling her with Ggio since most people whom I know like seeing them together are all OMFG THEY'RE SOO HOT FOR EACH OTHER!11 and I only hope I'm not bringing you down. ;A;

[saketiems]

saketiems [Kyouraku Shunsui - Bleach]
cuarta_espada [Ulquiorra Schiffer - Bleach]
szayelgrantz [Szayel Grantz - Bleach]
lifein_shadow [Tara Maclay - Buffy the Vampire Slayer]

Please, please give me crit. Thanks.

[queen_of_flash]

Shunsui is a great take. He's fun-loving, laid back, and actually comes across as more just playful than truly perverted (usually) which I view as an improvement.

Ulquiorra is well-done. I can't say more than that.

If anything, you're doing Szayel too well. His tags make my skin crawl. I don't like tagging with him but that's because I hated the character in the manga too. Which just says even more for your portrayal.

And I don't know Tara.

[saketiems]

Thank you so much.

I try to keep Shunsui just on the right side of the fine-line between pervert and fun flirt, and I think it helps that he has Nanao and would never actually betray her - it really is all fun to him.

♥

I often worry about the creepiness of Szayel, he is a disturbing character to play sometimes. I'm proud you think I'm not doing too badly, thanks.

[sacredremains]

Don't realyl know bleach canon as you well know but playing with your three characters makes me want to get back into that fandom. ♥ Always look forward to playing with you even if I am a little slow on the tagging! D: Asch wuv his ghost waifu. Deep deep... deeeeeep down... it's in there :|

Tara's adorable ♥ and I look forward to playing her Willow if I get accepted.