april fools!!

[canuckchicklett]

Title: It’s Strange to Miss Someone You Don’t Remember
Part: 5/5
Fandoms: Generation Kill
Pairings/Characters: Brad/Ray, Walt
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 658 (Total : 8,132)
Warnings: Adult language, themes, and sexual content
Disclaimer: I do not own the show, or the fictional interpretations from which this is based. I’m just exercising my fangirl

Comments

[unomega]

Okay... okay, I'm gonna pace myself because I AM SO CONFUSED.

The joke is that... he died? Or that this is the final part? Or that Brad said such AN AWFUL THING?!

:'(

(If this is the end, I quite like it. It isn't how I envisioned things going, per se, but it is still so good!)

[canuckchicklett]

The chapter itself is the joke. This has nothing to do with story. But very few people responded to my last april fools joke that I decided to write a fake chapter.

I was going to finish it with Walt being the person who hit ray, and then while ray is dying in the road Walt and Brad had sexy man times. And Nate ran by and poked the dying man with a stick but that seemed a little too cruel.

[unomega]

Definitely relieved. PHEW. Can you feel it? My relief? I'm sending you a beta-copy of it through the internet waves so you understand how vitally wounded my heart was in the reading of this FAKE CHAPTER.

(haha, no, this would've been a cool ending. but, as it were, I'm glad it's not real.)

(And Nate poking the body? Really? Lol!)

[canuckchicklett]

I couldn't leave this as the ending. Ray is... well, he's Ray. The stubborn son of a bitch wouldn't leave that easily. And he's certainly not stupid enough to cross the road without looking both ways. XD
There is much to ensue. I'm starting to imagine an intense fight scene...

This can't be then ending now, and I still don't know what it is, but I can promise it will still have the same sense of resolve. (I wrote that into the fake chapter because I didn't want to be murdered in my sleep.)

Yes. Nate would have run by and poked the body with a stick. No real reason why. But it seems very out of character... Nate will make a debut performance soon. (And it will be very true to his character... I am assured of this.)

[veronibell]

HOLY FUCK WOMAN!!!!
That was just mean, I kinda want to ask for a divorce now, because that was EVIL!

Though in saying that I did kind of like it, Brad being an arse not so much, Ray being dead not in the least but the combination of all that was nice.

I still kinda hate you though.

Happy that this is not actually the last part

[canuckchicklett]

It's a good thing I did not go with the original plan then... probably would have gone way past divorce. You may have wanted to kill me.

[veronibell]

Well...the thought did cross my mind?
now I am curious, what, pray tell, was the original plan?

[canuckchicklett]

I was going to finish it with Walt being the person who hit ray, and then while ray is dying in the road Walt and Brad had sexy man times. And Nate ran by and poked the dying man with a stick but that seemed a little too cruel.