ff: a cold war space adventure

[cantbesilent]

title: a cold war space adventure
pairing: sawyer+juliet
words: 654
notes: total crack. this makes no sense whatsoever. i don't even understand it, though it's not as weird as the title implies. angela_weber made a joke and my muses are off having drinks so I made it happen. snowmaggedon+donkey wheel+happily ever after. only for you, bb. only for  you.

Comments

[angela_weber]

HOLY FUUUUUUUUUUUCK I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID IT. CAN'T BREATHE, TOO EXCITED. YOU DID IT. APOLOGIES IF THIS COMMENT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE, I THINK YOU JUST BROKE MY BRAIN. YOU WIN EVERY AWESOME PERSON AWARD EVER. EVER. OH MY GOD I CAN'T STOP GRINNING, THIS IS PURE UNADULTERATED WIN.

It’d be funny, maybe, if it was all fictional.

LOL OH MY GOD, THE META. GENIUS.

I'm gonna try to stop talking in caps now. But seriously, this has made my life. You took the crack and made it byootiful and gorgeous and happy ending-ish and so, so very THEM. I love how you start with him remembering such a normal, commonplace, almost mundane sort of moment (HIS CHEST TIGHTENING, OH MAN, SAWYERRRRR I LOVE YOU) and then just jump right into this insane context--you make it flow so naturally. The way you write their dynamic is and has always been so beautiful. So awesome.

“You cold, Blondie?” he asks with a sarcastic grin. She says nothing, but he sees her teeth chatter. “Do me a favor and help me push this, and wherever we end up, I’ll buy you a coat.”

[cantbesilent]

LOLOLOLOLZZZZZ I CANNOT STOP LAUGHING. Oh my gosh, seriously, I laughed so hard at this comment cause I LOVE IT and I think I blushed or something I LOOOOOOVE YOUUUUUU.

I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT. It's nice if everyone else likes it BUT IT MAKES MY DAY THAT YOU LIKE IT. It seems like I can never go fully, completely whacked, I gotta make it semi-normal, I gotta bring in the mundane. It's like, Sawyer and Juliet's thing. The beauty and squeefulness of their mundane days. I'm glad you think that transition worked, I tried to smooth it out, but I wanted a bit of a jolt, and I couldn't, for the life of me, just start with DONKEY WHEEL OMG.

Gah, I love you! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! I'm thrilled right now!

[cantbesilent]

THANK YOU. I like that your favorite part of the insane fic was the normal stuff. I appreciate that. :)

[ozmissage]

Okay I'm pretty sure the sound I just made could only be heard by dogs because that is the pitch of my squee....

THIS IS SO INSANELY AWESOME/PERFECT/AMAZING THAT IT HAS BROKEN MY BRAIN.

I love this, everything the way he doesn't remember what she was wearing when they first kissed but he remembers yellow to the way he teases her when they're about to turn the wheel

And the ending! OMG. They land in Tunisia and they're alive and I want this to be canon because it's perfect and it makes me giddy.

*Hugs*

Thank you for writing this it totally just made my morning/year. :D

[cantbesilent]

NO THANK YOU. This is, you know, an insane fic, so I am beyond pleased that you actually like it and that it works on some weird, anything goes level. Really, this comment made my day, you're the best. :)

[afishwithawish]

Amazing fic!!!!! ^__________________^
Ask him now and he won’t be able to tell you what she was wearing the first time he kissed her (but the memory is bright, like yellow)...
perfection

[cantbesilent]

thank you!

[bayloriffic]

Oh man, this was totally great! I love the whole idea of them getting off the island together using the wheel and the imagery and just the...feel of the whole thing is A+

he remembers all of that, from the color of her bandana to the tightening in his chest and the way the world kind of moved, right under his feet.
WONDERFUL

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! This fic was weird and unexpected and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and took the time for comments (esp. because I'm always such a big fan of what you write!). Thanks thanks thanks!