lost ff: its cry raves into the valley (juliet. s/j)

[cantbesilent]

title: its cry raves into the valley
characters: juliet; sawyer/juliet
word count: 1131
summary: her tears have a language
notes: set somewhere in that notorious time jump. this is a challenge taken from a random sentence at the random sentence generator. the sentence is the title. i recommend using a random sentence as a challenge to anyone that

Comments

[afishwithawish]

.*-*. So pretty!!!! *sniffle* I loved the Juliet insight, it was beautifully written, and I completely adored how James reacted. Thank you for sharing! <3

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! For the read and such a nice comment!

[jesterlady]

For having written it last night! Oh my gosh. This is amazing. The cadence and vocab. Just breath taking.

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! It was a surprisingly easy write, took about an hour, just kinda flowed out. I was worried perhaps that would equate suckiness so I'm happy to know you don't think so. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave such nice feedback!

[angela_weber]

Ohhh, this is gorgeous! Wow--I really teared up, and fics don't usually do that to me. It's so wonderfully phrased; there is such a sense of rhythm, such a lyrical quality to your writing. I have a major soft spot for James comforting Juliet in fic--and this was beautifully done. Wow. Brava!

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! Oh, I'm pleased as punch that you liked it. Tears are the highest form of compliment in my book, so that really blows me away. I have a soft spot for the same thing, but it always has to be done right, I'm always fearful of it being too much, so I tried to go less is more with this. Glad you think it worked. Thanks so much.

[sadie_carter]

Beautiful story, really :) I love it very much.

First of all I'm enchanted by your style. Of course, I don't read many things in english [well, besides ffs I don't read in english at all], but it doesn't change the fact, that I find your style very sophisticated and poetic. You use amazing epithets and metaphores. All of your descriptions are very plastic - they get on my imagination amazingly.

(...) and she would be so happy, if she was happy.I don't know exactly why, but this part won my heart. It's beautiful

[cantbesilent]

Wow, thank you! Once again I really really appreciate such tremendous feedback. The compliments to the writing are really very humbling and I'm incredibly flattered by them. And I appreciate such a detailed comment because I was worried about some things that you mentioned, so I feel better. :)

Thanks again, really, I'm so pleased you enjoyed.

[op_de_radio]

That was beautiful.
You are seriously an amazing writer. :]
Such eloquent style and usage.

[cantbesilent]

That is such a nice thing to say, I'm very flattered. And thank you for always taking the time to comment!