lost ff: scribbled on the backs of railway guides (s/j)

[cantbesilent]

title: scribbled on the backs of railway guides
pairing: james+jules
word count: 1812
summary: 30 more sentences over 3 years
notes: title taken from auden's o tell me the truth about love and prompts taken from 1sentence.  the first batch can be found here. i am truly addicted to writing them, it is sad and pathetic but fun and perfect for someone with little

Comments

[jesterlady]

These are beautiful! Like lovely snapshots you want to look at again and again.

[cantbesilent]

Thank you so much!

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! Both for reading and taking the time to comment, I really appreciate such nice feedback.

[polly_jorge]

oh this are amazing
so sweet and so them!!
I'm glad you wrote more!!!
my favorites are child, hands, view and music

[cantbesilent]

Thank you! I'm glad!

[angela_weber]

These are lovely, once again! All very sweet and very beautiful. You really strike at the essence of these two, and since they're always difficult for me to write I really admire the ease with which you've pulled this off. My favorites are Drink, Hope, Search (which made me tear up a little), Tears (very short, but very lovely), Unknown, and View (made me grin like crazy--oh, Miles! :D). Great, great work! I'm smiling and I can't seem to stop now. :)

[cantbesilent]

Gah, thank you! It makes me smile that they made you smile! I'm glad you liked view, that was a last minute addition, mostly because I just kept seeing that image of them at a distance from my perspective so I just made it good old Miles, lol.

since they're always difficult for me to write

Oh, but you wrote them so wonderfully a few months ago! I understand that though. Its funny because before this pair I only could ever write for one other ship, no matter how much I tried, so I just didn't bother. But these two just get in my head for some reason. I could bang my head all day trying to write Jate and it just won't work, but thankfully I don't feel the need since people like you pull them off so brilliantly. :)

Thanks again for such lovely feedback! There was actually overflow from this batch, a few I cut because I'm weirdly anal, so there might be one more batch, it depends.

[jam_min]

Aww, that was so sweet. I loved these little moments of them, you're really good at capturing them in just a few sentences, you tell us so much in so little words. They are all gorgeous, but my favorites are Child, Freedom, Home, New, Picture, Tears, Unknown. View.

[cantbesilent]

Thank you so much! For reading and for such lovely feedback, it is greatly appreciated, I'm flattered. And thanks for telling me which ones you liked the most, I'm always curious about that!