Bad Omens (Fanfic100)

[candyfics]

Title: Bad Omens
Fandom: Detective Conan
Characters: Shiho (General series)
Prompt: #32-sunset
Word Count: 752 words
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: I do not own Detective Conan. It all belongs to Gosho Aoyama. I simply borrow the characters, tie them up, and dance them around like life-sized puppets. I do wish they’d stop complaining.
Summary: There

Comments

[ytak]

*shiver* That's chilling.

[candyfics]

Thank you!

[insaneladybug]

Oooh wow, this is really powerful, and indeed chilling. I love how you mix descriptions with her thoughts; how she appreciates the beauty of the sunsets but has come to fear that certain kind of sunset because of what it always brings. The last lines especially are wonderfully written. I like how it's left like it is, too, so people can draw their own conclusions as to what happened next. After all, since her trying to take her life in the past failed, maybe there won't be a death the next day. But it's perfect the way it is, not knowing.

[candyfics]

...I always feel bad when I reply to your comments because you're always so eloquent and I'm so...err, not ^^;; But thank you, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

And poor Haibara... *pets

[asai_arcion]

But is it for him that the sky weeps red, or is it something else? And does it mean his death if it does mean what it seems to? [/waxing lyrical]

[candyfics]

...you are awesome :D

The idea was that it foretells that something will go VERY wrong, and since it always seems to be someone close to her, she figures Shinichi will be killed ^_^

[asai_arcion]

=^_^=

I realized that that was the hint you're supposed to take, that Shinichi will have something happen to him (but he always seems to manage to avoid death, no matter how unlikely.)

While I enjoy the 'good guys don't always win' feel, at the end I was reminded that I think in your writing that she says she won't become attached to anything ever again after one of the events. So maybe it's 'weeping' for the fall of the organization, something she wants, but is fearful of. It has been her home for her first childhood, and I don't think it's been fully explored, how she would feel once that burdon is gone.

[twitchytwitch]

Beautifully written, but horribly depressing.

Lovely description and I do like how it's left open-ended.

Adding to memories. x3

[candyfics]

Thank you very much!