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In the Big Apple (30 Ways: Shinichi/Ran)

Nov 16, 2007 23:15

Title: In the Big Apple
Fandom: Detective Conan
Characters: Kudo Shinichi/Mouri Ran
Theme: #6-vacation
Rating: R (for extremely suggestive content)
Disclaimer: I do not own Detective Conan. All characters are the property of Gosho Aoyama. I simply threaten to make them watch old Barney tapes unless they obey me. Trust me, they listen.
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misc: theme comm, character: shinichi/conan, fandom: detective conan/magic kaito, fic: 30 ways, character: ran

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candyfics November 18 2007, 22:47:32 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! *glomps you unto infinity* Thank you, hon! Glad you liked it! :D *also luffs on the long review* Thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuuu~!!! :D

Sugar rush? What sugar rush?

halfling_rogue December 6 2009, 11:48:23 UTC

Hmm. Very nice start out (the dinner was particularly cute), but the leadin to the smut seemed rather forced and rushed. Not to mention that with that little foreplay... it wouldn't have been very comfortable, much less satisfying. |D; Arguably you were just glossing over some of it, but there really didn't seem to be much hint of it at all. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong!

(If not, you may find this helpful, as it is insanely informative on so many kinds of levels.

Yes, I know, I'm a perv, and I research on Wikipedia before writing my lemons shut up)