Nocturne (30 Ways: Shinichi/Ran)

[candyfics]

Title: Nocturne
Fandom: Detective Conan
Characters: Kudo Shinichi/Mouri Ran
Theme: #27-forgive without forgetting
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I do not own Detective Conan. All characters are the property of Gosho Aoyama. I simply threaten to make them watch old Barney tapes unless they obey me. Trust me, they listen.
Summary: I can help you forget all

Comments

[magic_truth]

This is beautiful. And I want to cry. Really, no joke. In that way when the tears won't come and somehow it feels worse. There's just something about it...I don't know.

Well the characterization is brilliant and I can't even hate that girl for putting the moves on him. She's sympathetic in her own way.

If Ran had been the fic, her having seen the exchange would have been nice but no more. I think her walking out discreetly where he did not see her would have added intrigue but honestly I agree with you. This is just perfect.

And I downloaded the song. Also very nice.

*sigh* I think this is one of my favorite things you've ever written.

[candyfics]

Aww... *hugs* Thanks, hon~!

I was afraid people would nail me because ZOMG SHINICHI AND RAN DIDN'T END UP TOGETHER NOOOOOEZ!! But...now that we've been talking, I'm wondering if I could do a follow-up. It would be nerve-wracking, because I'd have to match the style >_>;;

Thank you so much--that means the world to me ~♥♥♥

[halfling_rogue]

I'd like to see a follow-up to that, if only because I've seen a very similar story done by another writer and I'm curious as to how you would handle it. I'm sure it would be lovely. ♥

[fyliwionvilyaer]

WAAAH Luv ^^ Much darker than usual shin/ran and I do enjoy ^_^ neat! *luffs*

[candyfics]

Thank you, sweetie! :D

[syv_on_air]

it may not have ended with shinichi & ran, but i agree that the way you wrote it is perfect as it is. the style and plot are impeccable. it's truly a wonderful piece of work. keep it up! ^_^

~syv

[candyfics]

Thank you so much!! *snuggles*