AHAHA... omg, no, I get that, and I really hope you didn't think I was taking a dig at it, cause it's so cute! I was just reading the last line where you say '“I won’t change a thing, Yama-chan. I promise.” His gaze lingered a few moments more before standing up and walking out of the room.' and it's just so... like, Idk, for me, when a promise is made in a fic, it's meant to be broken somehow. 8D So like, for me, what popped into my mind, because of that last line, was that Yamada would wake up in a parallel universe and have to go on some epic quest because Keito had made a deal with some higher being (like a devil/wizard/other thing) so he could change himself and be better and things and like, reality is literally tearing apart with all the consequences and stuff and Yamada has to go save Keito from this thing that's putting ideas in his head and making it worse and worse and worse. Kinda like a Wrinkle In Time, only not really, but yeah
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SOOO CUUUUUTE~ ♥♥♥
TY HUBBY I LOVE YOU 8D
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I'm starting to love them because of you! ♥
No prob! I LOVE YOU TOO! 8D
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THAT MAKES ME HAPPY. OKAYAMA IS EPIC AFTER ALL~
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NEBURRR. >D
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O_O GAAAAHHH!!!! Yama-chan you're so cute that way!
and awww Keito, don't ever think lower of yourself! like Yama-chan said: “Don’t ever change how you look, okay?”
you're perfect the way you are <333
and Yama-chan loves you <3333333333
hehe~ I love this!!!!
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OKAYAMA LOVE FTW ♥
Thank you! 8D
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that way <3
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Thank you so much!
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Though, though, I liked how the last line was TOTALLY ominous. Like I had this 'Dun dun duuuuuun' feeling. 8D;;
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It was supposed to be sweet? XD
Thanks!
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my rinnie and my faye, in one comment~ THIS IS MAGIC ♥
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