I have no idea who any of these people are (well, I guess they're baseball players...), I don't follow sports at all, I don't even know how the hell I ended up in your LJ, to be honest - and I thought this story was absolutely beautiful. Your writing, and the sense of constant tension and the way you capture it, and the way that parts of it echoed my own adolescent insecurities while the whole thing was amplified by the gay aspect, and, just...everything.
You've made me want to cyber-stalk baseball players, which is odd, but other than that, I'm really glad I stumbled across this! Thanks!
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and dude. eight months from now when i post beane's story, we can laugh about how we both thought it was over.
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I have money riding on that very outcome.
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omg, don't even joke if you're not gonna. Because I think I might need that. For completeness. You know. Very important.
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You've made me want to cyber-stalk baseball players, which is odd, but other than that, I'm really glad I stumbled across this! Thanks!
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and man, as far as cyber-stalking ballplayers: welcome to the club! we're having jackets made up.
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