(Sorry I am commenting on this so late.) I just have to say this this might be my favorite of your fics... No. It IS my favorite. I was actually shaking a bit as I read through the confrontation between Barry and Mark; that's how I know I was totally wrapped up in it. And oh Lord, this is my favorite part: “I have every right!” you cry, and you didn’t mean to say that, not that loud, not with that shatter in your voice. Damn. Just...damn. I loved that so much, that you had Barry speak his mind this time, and Mark didn't just get away with it all. I just empathized so much with Barry in this one. I wish I could say more without it sounding like babbling...
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I just have to say this this might be my favorite of your fics...
No. It IS my favorite.
I was actually shaking a bit as I read through the confrontation between Barry and Mark; that's how I know I was totally wrapped up in it. And oh Lord, this is my favorite part:
“I have every right!” you cry, and you didn’t mean to say that, not that loud, not with that shatter in your voice.
Damn. Just...damn. I loved that so much, that you had Barry speak his mind this time, and Mark didn't just get away with it all. I just empathized so much with Barry in this one.
I wish I could say more without it sounding like babbling...
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