In which Jen writes smut for a friend

[candesgirl]

I can't think of a good title for this! severinne this is for you and your prompt, that I asked for, of Sam/Gene pissed, Sam discussing Sam/Maya and the virtues of the Kama Sutra. Heh. I didn't get in as much jealousy as I hoped for, but Gene getting turned on? Yeah, I got that covered

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[severinne]

Uh... um... *fneurgle*

You know I love you, right? Because, um, wow. I love you. I'm giddy. I can't believe you actually wrote that for me, I love it!! And you!! *big smooches*

This is fun, filthy and utterly fantastic. Drunk!Sam is brilliantly unrestrained (lucky for Gene, and us) and I love that you did rein in Gene's jealousy in favour of him being simply stunned, it really works great here. Sam's descriptions are more sensual than lewd, which I love to bits, but then this bit, omg, this:

He bent slowly at the knees, lowering himself almost on top of Gene. “You’re her, okay?

Um. Okay. Yes, Sam, that's more than okay. *dies* I'm actually at a loss to decide which mental image is more brain-scorchingly hot - Sam doing that with Maya, or with Gene. I think I'll take both.

Did I mention that I love you yet? Really? *dips and kisses you some more, runs off to reread*

[candesgirl]

Hey are you gonna paw at me every time I write you fic? 'Cuz I could get used to that;) *greedily demands more kissing*

This was super fun to write (I rather enjoy writing things for you, oh woman who is so clearly inside my head). And it's your fault anyway that I find the image of Maya fucking Sam that hot, there is such power play there, and the likeness of her and Gene? It's flippin' hot.

Think I should post it over on the comm? I only didn't because it was seriously, write then post, no editing at all.

I am thrilled that you love it, because I really wanted you to love it!!

[severinne]

Oh, let's face it, I'm gonna paw at you regardless of whether you write me smoking-hot smut, this just means you have to put up with a lot more of it ;)

And how is it my fault that Maya fucking Sam is that hot? That's Maya's fault. Or Sam's. Or both, I don't care, but that's just gorgeously hot stuff whichever way you look at it.

I totally think you should post this to the comm, the world needs more Sam/Maya and there can never be enough Sam/Gene - granted, yes I would edit it first if I were you, by the third read I was coherent enough to catch past/present tense switches and the like, but yes, post it! I'll give you more kisses...

Ah, hell, I'll kiss ya anyway *smooches*

[candesgirl]

Your fault because you wrote that damn hot Maya/Sam fic way back...That's why it's your fault!

Dammit, tense issues....It's what I get for writing too fast ;)

*is ready to put up with more pawing*

[silvaa]

mmmm that was lovely, hot and sexy, and I could totally see Sam all snake hipped and drunk-eyed, and Gene just guh at him :D

[candesgirl]

I love drunk!Sam, he makes me horny happy!! Gene all gobsmacked is fun to do too, hehe. I lay all the blame though on sev, her fault completely!!

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

[gritsinmisery]

Drunk!Sam makes everybody happy.

I'm gonna go have a bit of a lie-down, now...

[candesgirl]

Happy...horny....Whichever ;) Enjoy your, er, lie down ;)

[draycevixen]

Smut? All I see is a discussion of a famous literary text. All the best teachers know that visual aids are indispensable. *nods sagely* -- Miss Drayce.

Hunnnnnnnh... The Vixen.

Really like Sam absent mindedly rubbing himself on the furniture. I may have a bit of a thing for frottage

[candesgirl]

Well there hello Miss Drayce, and hello to you to Vixen, happy to host you both ;) I appreciate the sage advice and the 'hunnnnnnnnnh', equally good I say!

Frottage makes me happy. I've no idea why, it just does. Glad it isn't just me, hehe.

Thanks!!

[draycevixen]

Well, from a psychological perspective of course frottage echoes back to a great majority of men's earliest sexual experiences so of course it is fascinating to witness adult males behaving in an adolescent way. Miss Drayce.

Because it's so bloody hot that they're so desperate for each other that they don't even take the time to unzip... Erm... or, because nude frottage is often a stage on the way to two characters committing to penetration -- Sev and I are in total agreement that we find it very... satisfying when two characters have been doing everything but that for a while. The Vixen.

[candesgirl]

Sev and I are in total agreement that we find it very... satisfying when two characters have been doing everything but that for a while.

Oh. So. Agreed! Do I get to be the third in that? *is hopeful* *notices this threesome has come up more than once* I am especially fond of Gene starting it, frotting like some crazed man against Sam because he's just realized he can't stand it anymore...*runs off to have her own lie down now*

And Miss Drayce, of course, your sage advice makes perfect, calculated sense as well. Tell me, does the Vixen keep you tied up in the shed sometimes?

[amproof]

I couldn't resist clicking the location to see just where that is, and it turns out that it's all over the USA, according to googlemaps. LOL

[candesgirl]

Haha, I know, that's why I put it there!!