Letting Go (1/1)
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: Radek/John
Summary: For John Sheppard everything was personal, especially the loss of one of his people.
Disclaimer: These guys don't belong to me.
Beta: Michelle
Notes: Written for ( Read more... )
Comments 1
The way that you portrayed John was really believable. From watching the series, I would have to agree that he is the type of character that is very much as you have portrayed him in the story. It comes over well.
I love the image of him being 'achingly delicate and sinfully seductive'. Nice one.
I also like the fact that you had Radek being the one helping John. I also like the way that you have John resisting him somewhat. I imagine that he would be the kind of person that wouldn't want to ask for, or admit that he needed help so this works well too.
I feel that the way that you have written the story comes over as a journey from the beginning of the relationship to now. It was lovely.
This story was lovely to read. I wasn't sure what to expect so I am pleased to say that you have produced a wonderful story for me.
Thank you very much.
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