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magnavox_23 October 19 2011, 04:08:30 UTC
CROTCH CUPPING, I love it! *smooches*

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campylobacter October 19 2011, 04:15:09 UTC
YES! *muahhhh*

YUM! ALL UR NADS R BELONG 2 JACK!

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magnavox_23 October 19 2011, 04:17:14 UTC
Jack was just saving him from blue balls...

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campylobacter October 19 2011, 05:10:34 UTC
"That's right, General sir, it was purely a survival response to extreme weather conditions."

Mission reports during the DADT must've been AWKWARD.

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campylobacter October 19 2011, 09:51:03 UTC
Yey thank YOU!

I was afraid no one would get the "cr-ALP" joke, it was kinda dorky. BUT SO VERY JACK.

Feel free to suggest a prompt for my Jack/Daniel plotbunnies. :D

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campylobacter October 22 2011, 19:53:15 UTC
Thanks! I hope to write more Jack/Daniel now that I'm starting to get a feel for O'Neill's voice. Not sure I've nailed him yet, but I'll keep trying.

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goth_clark October 24 2011, 03:19:01 UTC
great story.

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campylobacter October 24 2011, 04:00:10 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D

It turned out a lot less romantic than the one you wrote for me, but that's the difference between a Season 1 timeline vs. a post-SGU timeline.

[I canNOT type tonight LOL]

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elder_bonnie October 25 2011, 05:24:28 UTC
HEEEY.
I'm so sorry it took so long to get to this, I was out of the country for a little over a week. But I was excited to find this when I finally got back online! Thank you so, so much, this was fantastic! Judging from the comments, I take it you're not that into Daniel!Whump, but I really appreciate you accommodating my prompt. Loved the angle you went with. A Season 1/2 AU never would have crossed my mind but it worked out really well.

Loved it! <3 Thank you!

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campylobacter October 25 2011, 14:35:12 UTC
I AM SO RELIEVED. (And I hope your trip was awesome for whatever reason you took it.) I was trying not to be paranoid that you'd seen it & hated it by thinking that you hadn't seen it b/c of RL interfering.

Ha, oh, Anyone!Whump is hard for me to view/read/write, because I think silly things like "If Jack's leg is broken, he'll be in a cast for the next 3 or 4 episodes" or "Even after he heals, there might be arthritis where the bone knit for the rest of his life" or "Am I emotionally manipulating the audience with a cheap plot device?" or "That graphic explicit injury kink like in that JG Ballard novel is so not my kink."

After reaching the 1000-word minimum, I started to really enjoy writing the story, and am tempted to re-release for the Gen audience an expanded no-pairing version with Sam & Teal'c's scenes added, because I actually did work out the "science" & plot behind the rescue.

But anyway thank YOU for the prompts, because writing outside my comfort zone helps me to grow as an author. :D

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elder_bonnie October 25 2011, 16:52:19 UTC
Lol, no! I was afraid you might have thought something like that and I would have told you beforehand, but I didn't know who had my prompt xD The trip was amazing, thanks! I was working at an orphanage in Haiti for a few days.

And yeah, plot-wise, whump IS really silly and usually not very believable, but I still enjoy it for the "harmless" what-if scenario that it is :) I thank you for humoring me in this case, haha.

I think you should go for it, for sure. The story definitely has that feel about it that more can be pulled from it. I would love to read any elaborations you make, and I'm glad you enjoyed writing it! Thanks again for a great fill!

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